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Marc: *sighs* "Thanks, I needed that."

Vanessa: "That was slightly unexpected."
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
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*Kelsus gazes shyly at Vanessa*

*Kallik notices and sniggers* "You're falling for the blondie?"

*blushing* "She's got pretty hair..." ~Kelsus

"I say, Vanessa. Are you from the same story as Marc and Jake?" ~Rohsair
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Vanessa: *colors slightly* "Yes..."

*Marc and Jake look suddenly interested*

Marc: "She's blushing..."

Jake: "I see, I see..."

Marc: "Why's she blushing? Every guy in our school thinks her hair's pretty. And her eyes, and her nose, and her legs, and her arms..."

*Vanessa blushes again, then clears her throat* "Yes, I'm from the same story. I'm the Seer of the Third generation."

Marc: "Coincedentally, she's also the only SINGLE person in the Third generation."

*Jake grins*
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"




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"Oh-h..." ~Kelsus

"Your way is clear, brother mine!" ~Kallik

"Actually, I don't think it is." ~Kit

"Kelsus being a weird little creature that crawls over rooftops and peers down drainpipes." ~Iolo

"I don't go in the drains!" ~Kelsus

"Only because I stop you." ~Kallik

"No! I don't! I like the rooftops." ~Kelsus

"What other people are there in the Third Generation?" ~Rohsair

"Nosy." ~the Raven
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this is reaction to someone elses dialouge, but im late..

Artemis: *shrugges when she hears the raven telling her the truth* Well, all the sugar goes to King Frost... and he takes away the good food like he takes power from anyone apposing him. And he also has many people working under him and-

Ryder: *who sees that Artemis will definetly end up saying something she shoudn't* Sshh... do you want to get us killed?

Artemis: Well, we're alread-

Ryder: You never know where spies are! Sssshhh
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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"Oooh, yeah, go get killed! Please? Please, please, please, please, please, please, please get killed?" ~the Raven
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TL G-Wooster wrote:"Oh-h..." ~Kelsus

"Your way is clear, brother mine!" ~Kallik

"Actually, I don't think it is." ~Kit

"Kelsus being a weird little creature that crawls over rooftops and peers down drainpipes." ~Iolo

"I don't go in the drains!" ~Kelsus

"Only because I stop you." ~Kallik

"No! I don't! I like the rooftops." ~Kelsus

"What other people are there in the Third Generation?" ~Rohsair

"Nosy." ~the Raven


Marc: "Hm, well, considering Nessie has a weird aversion to human males, the little nightcrawler might have a chance. But anyway, to answer your question - Jake, Vanessa and I are the councilors of the Third generation, but the Third itself encompasses any of the Touched who are basically the younger people in the world today. Anywhere between the ages of 10 and 30."

Vanessa: *sputtering* "I DO NOT have an aversion to humans!"

Jake: "No one's blaming you, Ness. Look at what I'm dating."

Marc: *glares at Jake*
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"




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"You're Touched? Touched in the head?" ~the Raven

*winces* "I'm afraid..." ~Iolo

"It was asking..." ~Clover

"Begging..." ~Iolo

"On bended knee..." ~Clover

"Groveling..." ~Iolo

"With groveling grovelity..." ~Clover

"For that to happen." ~Iolo

"No fair! You got the last word, I wanted the last word!" ~Clover

"Should have got there quicker, shouldn't you?" *strums an out of tune note* ~Iolo
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Marc: *glares at Raven* "Oh, that's original. Like we haven't heard that one before."

Vanessa: *hurriedly* "Touched by Fire, Touched by the presence of the Daybright and saved from the Shadow-stain. Yeah."

Jake: *rolls eyes*

Marc: *to Iolo* "And what in the world is that noise?"

Vanessa: *embarrassed* "Will you just LEAVE, already?"

Jake: "She has a right to be annoyed, Marc. You're ruining her chances with the roof-crawling character."

Vanessa: *sputters* "But I'm not...But I don't..."
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"




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*Kelsus blushes, turning very pink*

"Shadow-stain? Oh, sounds nice." ~Rohsair

"He means linguistically." ~Fal.

"Oh, yes. Of course." ~Rohsair

*to Marc* "An off-key note. Couldn't you tell?" ~Iolo
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Marc: "I could tell. I could definitely tell." *jams headphones over ears*

Jake: "Rohsair, it's not nice. Linguistically, maybe - Blackbird has a taste for the theatrical - but in every other way, it's very very NOT nice. Ask Marc for more details."

Vanessa: "On second thought, don't ask Marc. She'll get even nastier. They're not very pleasant memories."

Jake: "And Kelsus, while you're making eyes at my best friend, can I ask what kind of roof-crawling character you are? You know, just to make sure you're not planning to eat her or anything."

*Vanessa turns very, very red - almost purple*
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"




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Ryder: Quick, while they're all distracted! *Ryder and Artemis run away from could-be-spies.*
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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Marc: "Wow. They're even more paranoid than us."

Vanessa: "Understandably. They're being mistaken for monsters. We're being mistaken for...um..."

Jake: "Freaks? Weirdos? Obnoxious brats?"

Vanessa: *glares* "Thank you, Jacob."
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"




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*snickers* "They want to be brought back, unwilling!" ~the Raven

"Well, Jacob, it's sort of like... a kind of... I mean, we're... What are we, Kallik?" ~Kelsus

"You don't even know what you are?" ~Kallik

"I know, but I don't really know how to explain it..." ~Kelsus

"That's because you're stupid." ~Kallik

*humbly* "Yes, Kallik." ~Kelsus

"They're what-d'yu-call-thems. Imp-y thingies." ~Iolo

"About two feet tall, sallow, bony, very long nails..." ~Fal.

"Claws." ~the Raven

*Kelsus hides his hands behind his back*

"... and they live on the rooftops." ~Fal.

"And the gutters." ~Kit

"No we don't!" ~Kallik

"Nothing wrong with the gutters." ~Johnny

*Kit goggles at him* "What are you doin' here? You've not even arrived yet!"

*Johnny grins and sits down* "I'm developing apparently."

"And being swanky. Now all the others will want to come in." ~Kit

"Doesn't the more make the merrier?" ~Johnny

"Not if the more includes legless boys, more than one kind of freak, rooftop creatures, tone deaf bards and various kinds of idiots." ~the Raven

"You being one of the various kinds of idiots?" ~Kallik

"yeah. And you being the other kind." ~the Raven
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Marc: "Lovely. So we're all freaks here."

Jake: "An imp? Sorry, is that like any relation to...I don't know...demonic shapeshifters or anything?"

Vanessa: *groans* "Jake! Stop being so paranoid!"
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"



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