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I know what will spark this: emo girl and nerd boy! ~ Rylie. *waves a 'magic wand'*

What's an emo? What's a nerd? ~ Elayna.

Well, apparently emos are dark and not very happy people, which is Moon. And nerds are smart, which is Seth. ~ Rylie.

Ermm....Rylie? ~ Elayna.

Yes? ~ Rylie.

Your stick's gone. ~ Elayna.

So it has, where is it? ~ Rylie.

It flew over there. *points in Raven's general direction* ~ Elayna




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"Hey look, I found a stick!" ~Morgan

"But we're looking for the library..." ~Melania

"But a stick is ten times cooler than a library!" ~Jeremy

"Sigh...are all guys this dimwited?" ~Melania
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Care to test that stick against my hatchet, Jeremy? *smiles pompously* - Samuel Garrison
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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*steals stick from Morgan and runs at guy with hatchet* RAWR!!! ~ Jeremy

*hits head with hand* Oh my god, he really is that dimwited... ~Melania

Jeremy, no!!! *runs after him* ~Morgan
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Ohhh...penny! ~ Elayna. *Steps back into Jeremy's path. Calamity, falling, and a whole lot of pain ensues*

Ouch, are you alright? ~ Rylie.

My body's new name is pain. ~ Elayna.




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Marc: *points to Elayna* "Did she somehow slip into our story?"

Jake: "Nope. She's got a penny, and we're all broke."
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
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"You are broke. What's new?" ~the Raven

"Hearts or pocketsess?" ~Fal.

"Zou-" ~Harry

"Don't!" ~all

*sulky* "Alright..." ~Harry
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I have the penny! ~ Elayna *waves penny around*

Waving money around in front of broke people isn't the best idea, you know. ~ Elayna




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*the Raven sneaks up behind Elayna and snitches the penny* "Money!"

"Hello! I like money!" ~Clover

"Pretty penny..." ~Rohsair

*bathes the penny in flame* "Ooh! Shiny!" ~the Raven

"It burns!" ~Iolo

"No... it's madness, and it's not fair!" ~Fal.

*the others stop and gawk at him*

*pause*

*politely* "Life isn't fair. Hadn't you noticed?" ~Iolo

"But it started off by being fair! Now it's stopped." ~Fal.

"Maa'lesh." ~Rohsair
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir




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Ohhhh. I could have used that penny, why'd you have to set it on fire? ~ Holly

So what, we don't need money. Money is an unnecessary evil, besides I can provide food for us. Where's a nearby shop that I can steal from? ~ Tanner

You guys, it's all right, we don't need the penny and we were fine without it ~ Gwen

Yeah, I suppose. It would've helped to have it though. ~Holly

I just told you, we don't need any stupid money! ~Tanner

Holly grumbles.
It is better to travel well than to arrive.
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*Kit blinks at Tanner*

"Oooh, shiny!" ~Kelsus

"Oh great, the K overload begins again." ~the Raven
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What is a penny, but a mere fragment of reality?-Deimos




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"Uhh, it's lunch?" ~Kit

"A penny... It's so pretty and shiny and the edges are so smooth and go on forever..." ~Kelsus

*Kallik sits on Kelsus's head*

"That actually sounded deep for a moment, Deimossy. Then I understood it and it became as shallow as your mind is. For something to be properally deep, no one must understand it." ~the Raven

"So... your ramblings count as deep, then?" ~Fal.

*sweetly* "Or it could be that you're just stupid." ~the Raven

*lately realising* "New person?" ~Rohsair

"Plural. New people." ~Clover

"How fun." ~Kallik
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir




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Marc: "Great. New people. Go socialize, Nessie." *turns to leave*
Jake: "Um...I have to go to the bathroom."
Vanessa: "Excuse me, you guys, where are your manners?"
Marc: "Nonexistent. I blame my parents."
Jake: "I have manners. I just have to go to the bathroom." *runs away*
Vanessa: *to Deimos and Kelsus* "Ignore them. Jake's just shy and Marc's just rude."
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
S: "We eat them!"




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*speaking to self* "None of them know what it's like to date a gay guy..." -Teeya
Tom Riddle: "You read my diary?"
Harry Potter: "At first, I did not know it was your diary. I thought it was a very sad, handwritten book."



Never express yourself more clearly than you are able to think.
— Niels Bohr