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Hmm...I'm not sure if I can say because I already know what the stories about but maybe if I were someone whose seen this for the first time I'd say that this would be about somebody who finds a book in a house and they read it.

The Edge of Innocence

~Angel
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.




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Sounds like a story about a young kid with a troubled past, looking forward to a bleak future. I would read the blurb. At the very least, I'd pick it up.

The Heaven We Chase

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Teenagers on a voyage of maturity and discovery. Drugs or something similar would likely be involved. Depending on the blurb, I might pick it up.

When God Has Passed You By

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Sounds like a dark, brooding story, with possible abuse, bullying and/or other painfull experiances. I probably wouldn't pick it up unless I was in a brooding type of mood.

Blithe Bereavement
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Goldfinger: No Mister Bond, I expect you to die!




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Historical romance, perhaps set during one of the World Wars. A woman looses her fiancee to the fighting, only something turns up -- either he didn't die, or she realised she didn't really love him at all and is much the happier by his death. I wouldn't read it, sorry.


Magpie, Magpie
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Sounds to me like some sort of summer story, maybe about a young girl or boy growing up. Perhaps some light romance involved. Sort of a Tom Sawyer thing. I might read it if I had nothing else.


The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit
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It sounds like a collection of novels or stories that go together, and are almost childlike or fantasy, or melodramatic. It's probably not something I would pick up in a store. But a lot of people go for that kind of think, you know, like...Harry Potter and the... (fill in the blank).

Okay, So Maybe I'm a Pirate
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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Um...something about a misunderstood teenager, possibly a rebel, who tries to stand out in every way she can. Or possibly about real pirates, me hearty. :wink:

Dear Reader, Don't Read.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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Sarcastic, first person story, possibly about a young man who's not quite with it who discovers this horrific conspiracy at his work. I'd definitely pick up and read the blurb.

The Kingdom Is Departed
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A medieval adventure thriller involving a quest to discover the identity of the killer of the heir to the kingdom.

The Child in the Dark
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Makes me think about a mistreated child, maybe locked away in a basement or something. Other than that doesn't raise too many ideas.

I would probably read the blurb (depending on wether I find the cover art attractive or not).


Black-Eyed Susan
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A girl who gets into drugs, ending in a horrible scene in which someone important dies.

All In A Day
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Sounds like a contemporary novel, or maybe an action-adventure; I can't tell really.

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Some fantasy perhaps, or devastating action novel.
I would read!!

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Sounds like a superhero. Or maybe a horror story about some kind of monster who howls. It's an OK enough title.

"Back Into The Gray."
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