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It doesn't really say anything. Maybe a historical romance, or a modern thriller. I wouldn't pick it up, sorry.

The Kingdom is Departed.
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Sounds like a fantasy or historical thing about the break down of a monarchy, maybe family struggles? I would maybe pick it up.

Sick Puppy.
When you look at your life, in a strange new room, maybe drowning soon, is this the start of it all?




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I'm guessing it's either a puppy love story or a story about a sick puppy that brings the whole community to join together and saves it. I probably wouldn't pick it up.

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Harmonious...but it doesn't seem like it really means anything.

The Mystery of Sarah Jackson
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Umm...about a girl named Sarah Jackson who is mysterious? Maybe she died under mysterious circumstances, or disappeared mysteriously? Or left a mysterious note! I might pick it up, depending on the cover art. I'm horrible that way.

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I imagine either a story about a young person and an old person who have some sort of spiritual adventure together and things.

Or a story about drugs.

Whether I'd pick it up or not would depend on my mood.

Fragile Little Things

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Sounds like a story about children or truth. Maybe antiques, tea-sets or something of that nature. If the cover art was good, I might pick it up.

I'm going to go again:

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Sounds like a paradox in itself...or maybe a group of them.

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It sounds like a romance story. Sentimental things in life, the small important things.



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I'm reminded of The Sisterhood of Travelling Pants, for some obscure reason. Anyway, it sounds like either chick lit of YA fiction. Not very interesting to me, sorry. I can't come up with titles like this, but it is kind of fun.

It's Survival

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There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.




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Ghetto life? A story about people living in a slum area.

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I can't quite make out what this book might be about. Maybe a place by the water? fiction?


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Magic Travels.


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Sorry, wiseman. I'm getting vibes of elves and dragons and fairies that all go on some journey to battle the evil sorceror and save their kingdom. Maybe a lost princess and her evil twin thrown somewhere in the midst.

I guess I'll post mine again.

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I would probably pick this one up, because the title immediately draws me in. Sounds like a rather calm story where one has to cope with the past and perhaps settle some things that have to do with it in the present. Maybe it's about reviving some sort of movement, not sure, that's why I'd pick it up. ;)


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It sounds like a thriller to me. I'm not sure what else, except two main characters who do a pinky swear to get out of a situation alive. Not sure.

Unlock the Stone Circle
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.



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