of dusk and dragonflies

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the blossom in Hyde Park
was early this year
and now petal upon petal
is washed away with the rain




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I know the feeling ^^

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This one makes me think of a sad rainy day, you've captured the shifting seasons well in this one. Way to go Icy!

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tell me again
how the sun always rises
after it sets


Honestly I've been wondering the same. :D (Love that Haiku)

You have an amazing streak! Keep it up Icy! You can do it XD





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In London's rain, there's a rhythm, a rhyme,
A story unfolding, one drop at a time.
It's the city's pulse, the beat of its heart,
A symphony played on the windowpanes, a chart
Of moments fleeting, yet eternally captured,
In the rain's embrace, London is enraptured.




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Birdsong is muffled by the weight of the mist
and rain falls with gentle persistence.


oh that is some beautiful phrasing.

I love how much your poetry has a feeling of "time a place" and "geography" it picks up the reader and places them in a little scene in time. Lovely work so far Icy! Looking forward to continuing to read along this month!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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I love how your poems are so short but leave you with so much to sit with! Also the way you use the structure of 4 (where you have this lovely repetition building up in a sort of firm but gentle way) differently from 8 (where it feels to me much more about the rhythm and the story).
I also loved 7, how much was contained in that simple petition, the need for that reassurance! Thanks for making me stop to consider things. :)
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the magnolia trees are in bloom
on the banks of the Thames
and if I reach high enough
up

up

up
I might climb these branches
to grasp at the heavens"




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when city blossoms bloom
facades muted in winter slumber
come alive
aromatic spices
onions, chilli and overflowing drains

the streets begin to fill
spilling out from living room bars
they line the pavement in groups
of twos
and threes
past bagel shops, curry houses, grafittied walls
and vintage windows
not even retreating when twinkling lights
replace the fickle springtime sun

clutching foam topped beers
they huddle together
anticipating summer




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I would be remiss if I did not mention
the symbolism of the April shower.
So I will.




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birds chirp on rooftops
flowers bloom among concrete
spring in the city




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In the quiet corners of my cluttered room, where dust motes dance in sunbeam’s embrace, I wield the broom, a weary custodian,
Sweeping away cobwebs and memories
The broom bristles against the floorboards, dislodging ashes of forgotten fires, I sweep away fragments of love and loss,
As if spring cleaning could mend life’s frayed wires.
The clock ticks, measuring my futile efforts, dust motes settle once more, like memories unclaimed,
And I wonder if this ritual of renewal, can mend the cracks in my soul, left untamed.
So I gather the remnants of nostalgia, fold them neatly into cardboard boxes, And tuck them away in the recesses of my heart,
Where spring cleaning cannot reach
For amidst the polished surfaces and empty spaces, lies the ache of what was, what could have been, And as I close the door on this melancholy reverie, I realize that some stains cannot be wiped clean.




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Ooo!! Your poem hit me right in the feels!! It's like you're narrating my own battle with clutter and memories. I could practically see those dust motes dancing as you wielded your broom against the chaos. And oh, the nostalgia tucked away in cardboard boxes, (I've got a few of those myself, probably hidden under my bed or something :D) But seriously, your words capture that bittersweet struggle of trying to tidy up not just our physical space but our hearts too. It's like you're saying, "Hey, life, I see you with all your messy bits, but I'm still here, fighting the good fight!" It's a reminder that it's okay to let some things stay tucked away in the recesses of our hearts!! <3<3
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Leaves grasp the twilight,
Nature's breath in short whispers,
Day ends with a sigh.




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Gentle rains whisper,
Green fields bask in soft sun's glow,
England's summer blooms.




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These are so lovely and beautiful <33 Thank you for sharing! I am really enjoying your poems so far!!
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