The Shoe Inspector

I look for little defects in your shoes that may cause you to trip up later.

What I look at: I review all types of shoes with with any tag rating. My specialties are in the area of novels and short stories, but I will try my hand at anything.
Disclaimer: I will try anything, but there is a minute chance that I may get triggered by something and have to quit. Upon such an unfortunate event, you will be PMed an apology message.

What I look for:
PLOT
1. Trailing shoelaces-when the pace drags just a little too much
2. Cracks-when the plot/pace is a little disconnected and choppy
3. Soleless shoes-when the pace is rushed a bit too much and the main part is left behind

DETAILS
1. Unpolished surfaces-when the piece could use a little editing and basic touchup.
2. Unmatching shoelaces-when a few inconsistencies ruin the overall effect
3. Leaks-when the phrasing gets a bit off and Grammer mistakes slip in through the holes

What a review includes: You may order either a general review or a specialized review.

GENERALIZED REVIEW
A generalized review will look for all the issues mentioned above, and go through solutions with you. It also comes with high praise for the places you did wonderfully on.

SPECIALIZED REVIEW
A specialized review grants you the freedom to pick and chose what parts you want criticism on and which parts you don't. When I review, I will pay special attention to any issues you bring up.

All reviews are free and will come with positivity, I promise.

Thank you for visiting your local Shoe Inspector!

hey kaia! if you could take a look at this poem of mine, that would be great! <3

Hi, momo! Your review should arrive by the end of this week. Thanks for your order!

momonster wrote:hey kaia! if you could take a look at this poem of mine, that would be great! <3

I read your poem, it's great!!! drift boss

Hey kaia :3 could you please review my dedication collection? (if thats not too much of a burden for you.)

Could you share a link @teatime? Also, it may be a while because of school and life but I'll try to help you out when I can

@KaiaJersaga here ya go! the dedication collection (updates with time)

also i have two i's in my name :3

Oops I didn't check to make sure I'd tagged you. Sorry. Will get to it when I get a chance

February, 1775 – Scotchtown Plantation

Thank you!

@Fishr Caught me at a good time! I'll be right in there!!

Thabks!

I was wondering If you could look at any chapters of My novel Everbound. ( It does play with themes of Heaven and hell I understand it's a touchy topic.) On top of that, some might be a bit long and unpolished so no rush to check it out. I know losing a pet can be hard so take your time.

A generalized review for any chapter you pick would be fine.

Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.

Everbound Book One : Demon's and Books Oh My! ( Part One.)

Everbound Book One : Demon's and Books Oh My! ( Part 2.1)

If it is too sensitive I get it and like I said you can pick please take your time, Thanks

@moonlily I will give them a try for sure!! It will be lateeee though. Nursing school keeps me busy!

I get it, school needs to come first, especially with the added stress of nursing. so

Hey, there! Are your offers for reviews still open? I have part of a story I'm working on under the title To Paxaria in my portfolio. Would you mind reviewing at least one of the three parts I have posted?