Que's Review Corner

@HGsomeone yep, I anticipate getting to that later today!

@ChrisDixon thanks, and no problem!

Thanks Que for the suggestions!
I may have to pop back around some other time

Hi @Que,

Wow I think I'm responsible for half the posts in here. *apologizes profusely and offers cookies for compensation*

Could you take a lot at the newest chapter?

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.2

@HarryHardy

I swear one day I will manage to review before you have to come asking for it D: (but it is not this day!)

I’ll get to it tomorrow! Probably in about 12 hours. Sorry that you had to come here and ask me, but it’s always a pleasure to read and review your work! <3

Okayy...@Que that's fine. Your reviews are worth coming here and begging for.

Glad that you're enjoying it.

I'll look forward to the review.

Hello Que! Hope you are doing well.

I have a poetry review request — Last walk (3rd Draft)

I would love your insights and feel on this one, I'm trying to get a diverse group of YWS poets to review the drafts! If possible I would like your thoughts on what could be improved (punctuation, meaning, imagery , flow or anything else) in the next draft.
(Also, there's no hurry at all)
Thanks!

Wow, third draft! I'll get to this hopefully today or early tomorrow @Traves. ^_^

Just a heads up to anyone who wanders over here, my review requests will be temporarily closed until July 30. I’ll be on vacation and not coming to the site super often, so I don’t want to make any promises I can’t keep. If anyone requests a review between now and July 30, I will still be happy to review it, but it will probably have to wait until August.

Until then, happy writing!

Hi @Que,

I am here for your regularly scheduled bi weekly review request,

Could you take a look at the newest chapter?

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.3

P.S. I hope you enjoyed your vacation.

Thanks @HarryHardy! I’ll be on it first thing tomorrow.

P.S. yeah it was fun, thank you!

Hi @Que,

I am here for your regularly scheduled bi weekly review request,

Could you take a look at the newest chapter?

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 5

Yes I totally copy pasted my earlier request.

Heeyy

I know I mentioned this already in the pad but I wanted to leave a formal request too. Sorta continue the pattern in this thread.

Could you please take a look at the latest part?

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 6.1

Thanks in advance!

If you're still accepting review requests, could you check out my novel 'The Rage' that I'm currently uploading? It's a vampire novel set in a small village. It's a prequel to another novel I uploaded on here a while ago. Basically 'The Rage' is set in 2020 and the human population are discovering that vampires actually exist and live among them. I'm looking for readers willing to read chapter by chapter as I'm looking for reviews on how the story is progressing and how the characters and the relationships between them are being portrayed. Here's a link to the first chapter! The Rage (Chapter 1)

@HarryHardy I'll get to yours tomorrow!

@MissGangamash I'd be happy to review the first chapter (I'm a tad busy so it may not be until Sunday depending on how tomorrow goes). If you think my review is helpful, then I'm happy to go through all of your other chapters, but there might just be several days between each.

Que wrote:@HarryHardy I'll get to yours tomorrow!

@MissGangamash I'd be happy to review the first chapter (I'm a tad busy so it may not be until Sunday depending on how tomorrow goes). If you think my review is helpful, then I'm happy to go through all of your other chapters, but there might just be several days between each.

That's great, thank you!