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Hey it would be fly great if you could review my book im writing.

Service wanted: review one chapter
Name of work/s:Dragon tomb
Link/s to work/s:
dragon tomb//chapter 1: the Griffinths

Hey, so I just posted a Prologue and Chapter One to my novel (I literally joined 2 days ago lol). Looking for any reviews at all, anything helps.

Title: Achromatic
Links: Achromatic- Prologue , Achromatic- Chapter One
Genres: Fantasy, Science Fiction, Teen Fiction
Type of Review: anything you feel like

Thank you! <3

One chapter review
Box of Chocolate
Box Of Chocolate Prologue

Here’s my new and improved note to you all. I’m going to say what I will review, and I will review it.

So here’s what I will review:
Poetry
Lyrics
Short stories (see below)

And basically I won’t review anything else. Now, this may change over time, so make sure to check back every now and then. So, I’m going to give myself a week between you requesting the reviews and me giving you them. If I don’t do them in that week, give me a prod on my wall and I’ll get to you as fast as I can.

I’m also going to do a lottery thing with short stories, so if you have a short story you want reviewing, just say, and every time I get two I’ll flip a coin and see which one I need to review. Also, if you want to you can say in your post whether you want to be heads or tails. I don’t have a time limit for myself about them, but obviously I will have to wait for two entries so it might be a while. However, if I said you won and I don’t review it in a decent amount of time, give me a prod on my wall.

I think that’s it for now! This all may change soon, so make sure to check back in a while if you haven’t found what you’d like to have found.

Bump. (Also ignore above post, the first one is correct)

Hey, could you review my work "Marked Chapter I- Violet" pretty please? I'd appreciate it!

Sure! I’m not the best at reviewing novels, but I’ll give it my best shot!

Hey there, WritingPrincess! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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