Will Review for Souls

Can you review my poem, Night-time, please?

@aulyasela3597 please use the code!

Title: Indonesia Ghost Mythology
Link: Indonesian Ghost Mythology
Genre(s): Horror, Supranatural
Content Rating: 18+
Type of review: (I don't know, this is somekind of an essay about an urban legend of ghost in my country, not a literary work)
Type of piece: Essay, Article

Title: and the snow is falling up into the sky
Link: and the snow is falling up into the sky
Genre(s): Mystery/Suspense, Realistic (but not really? Honestly I couldn't figure out what other genre it would be)
Content Rating: 12+ for content
Type of review: Extremely Detailed - more detail on plot, please!
Type of piece: Short Story

Thanks so much.

So I wrote the first chapter of a book I want to write but I'm unsure about it. Maybe you could check it out and give me some critic and tips?

It's basically fantasy
Its called ragon Tomb

Please use the code @Spilledink!!

If you're interested, I have a Prologue and Chapter One posted to a project I've been invested in for a while- reviews desperately need for motivation T^T

Title: Achromatic- Prologue, Achromatic- Chapter One
Link: Achromatic- Prologue , Achromatic- Chapter One
Genre(s): Fantasy, Science Fiction, Teen Fiction
Content Rating: 12+
Type of Review: Normal- somewhere between non specific and ED
Type of Peice: Novel/Chapter

I'll also be posting Ch.s 2 and 3 sometime over the next couple weeks, if you would be so kind as to review those too, or if you would prefer to save your reviews until Ch. 3 and just do a big dump ED review lol. Thanks! My soul is yours for the taking

I'll get to all of yours today, tomorrow, and on Monday!! Maybe even Sunday if I get lucky. Also, @ChristenedPages I would love to review the other chapters! Just send me the links!

Achromatic- Chapter Two

Achromatic- Chapter Three

Thank you so much! I appreciate it

No problemo!

Dear zaminami,

Title: Bloody Nails--- 1
Link: Bloody Nails--- 1
Genre(s): Horror, Mystery/suspense. There will be supernatural, violence and adventure ahead.
Content Rating: none
Type of piece: Novel/chapter

Hope you'll review it as soon as possible, motivating me to keep writing, telling me where i go wrong and helping me improving...

Got it! I'll review tomorrow if I can

If you still need stuff to review, my LMS is open, but it's not needed if you have too many reviews or don't have the time

All you have to do is link them and place a content warning and I'll review in RevMo, @Oxara!

I miss your poetry reviews!

Can you review this one for me possibly? to my father

Feel free to say no, since there's already 5 reviews on it, I was just looking for a bit more criticism.

Thanks!