The Curse of the Wyvern [DT]

Bout half done. Working on finishing it now.

@Lumi that sounds like a cool post idea, I hope you end up going through with it.

Nice post, @SirenCymbaline! @Lumi, I saw that sneaky anime nosebleed.

As you can see, I posted. Had nothing else to do, and I wanna boost activity.

I had said I wanted all first posts in by the first, and I would still like that. However, that's ridiculous, so maybe by the tenth. Sound good? Also, scribbleinks messaged me that they were dropping out. So, uh, yeah.

By the way, first posts don't need to be long. So, you don't need to spend hours writing them, if you don't want to. Introduce your character. Get them in a guard of they aren't already. That's all I need them to do.

@SirenCymbaline: I think Sius would be quiet and not reply much. He's not much of a talker - he's used to being a loner and happens to be an introvert - so I think Rona's conversation with him maybe unfortunately one sided.

By the way, awesome posts everyone! ☆

Awesome post, @XxXTheSwordsman! Who wants to go next? Preferably someone new?

Do we want to do something about the continuity error his post created?

I didn't see any major continuity errors. (Only one was that technically the Prince turned 19 the night before... I figured it was too small to mention.) Where was it?

In my entry, Nal'tor had knocked Laurel out and was taking her to the commander for questioning. Aaaaand now instead he's chilling with Sylvetta.

Gotta keep to that timeline, folks. xD

I can make a post of Dya confronting Sylvetta about Nal, if we want to get them all in the same room. (Sylvetta and Dya would then go confront Nal and sort this mess out --all while Laurel is still only wearing a robe whoops I guess xD)

It'll be good to see Dya in action. Plus, everyone in the arc so far has gotten a good rounding of character traits both in the light and in the dark. Even McDagger (sorry but I cannot call her anything but this for now on) is developing in my head.

Where would she go? Back to Sylvetta where a political firestorm is about to break loose, or after Laurel where there's actual physical danger?

...or away to ruminate.

Maybe have Dya bring Laurel in, and then Laurel can awaken. Then, we'll have what I imagine to be the highest ranking Magicians in the land all in one room. Topic of conversation could shift from Firemaker's incident to warfare tactics.

Oh I was under the assumption you wanted Laurel to deal with her own problems after sending Dya out lol. If that's the case Dya will definitely confront Nal in the room. The only problem is that would put Nal in two places at once (both in laurels room and sylvettas)

Iiiiiif we go with the route above, then Sylvettas could be like "what's all that commotion??" and see a firefight (heh) happening in the room.

Also if Nal has a deathwish, he could always ignore Dya and/or basically shoo them away.

Okay, go with what you think is best... I don't really know what I'm talking about anyway. This whole continuity concept is messing with me. XD

Omnom wrote:The only problem is that would put Nal in two places at once (both in laurels room and sylvettas)

^That is the continuity error. Lumi's post was where Nal was last mentioned before Sword's latest post, so that's what I'm going off of. Basically, for Nal to go from this huge confrontation with Laurel to casually sitting in Sylvetta's room talking about the weather or stuff in the very next post, well something's not right. I think it's just a failure of communication

Okay, I get it.

I apologize about that issue. When I have the chance I will add the section to the beginning mentioning Nal going and getting Laurel.