The Curse of the Wyvern [DT]

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OH RIGHT. The trial.

I think it would be fitting (assuming I can request that Laurel's be down the line a bit) if her trial was recounting the steps of the story that she foreshadowed (and technically backdrafted) in the ballet hall, only, you know, the whole story and not the first quarter to save on expository banter time.

I figured you guys wouldn't want to read through a full flashback. :P
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@SirenCymbaline @Lumi @Mage Those work! Good ideas, too.
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I think I would prefer to have him stuck with a Magician like Laurel, but it would be cool if Rona and Sius became friends before she becomes an Inheritor. By being stuck with a Magician, I mean something along the lines of a cave-in or falling into ravine and being stuck together until help can arrive or they can figure a way out.

By the way, I love the posts everyone has made so far!
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@Mage Okay then, I like that. We can still have the friends thing as a sideplot.

In that case, I think Rona could use a Magician to be a mentor character to try to teach her how to do magic right. Maybe someone who is a little impatient with her. Idk.
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@SirenCymbaline Well, there's no other Earths, but Sylvetta would likely have some knowledge of other types. She could fulfill the role.




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I would like that, if you would.
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As for Nal his worst fear is not being able to protect someone he cares about. Though he would likely incinerate the one responsible, he would fall into a depression. (The happiest person losing his smile)




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@Sheyren, could I have you check over my backstory? I think it's good, but wanted to double-check. I always like to double-check. After that, I'll see what I can do to think up a challenge.
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Looked good to me... By the way, in your post, have your character appear before Sylevtta to ask to join, since Sylvetta will definitely not decline such a powerful offer.

Note to everyone: If there's any Magician's who need to be introduced and you have no idea how, just alert me and I'll come up with something.




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Right, thanks @Sheyren!
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Can I have my first post be Branwen getting in to meet Sylvetta to see if she can join the Order of Royal Magicians (I think that is what it was called)?
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Alrighty then, I'll try to get it in this afternoon/evening or tomorrow, though I may not be able to.
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If you were wondering what Sylvetta looks like, I made this.
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