Falcon's Feathered Feedback

Hello everyone!

I am open to reviewing pretty much anything: essays, poems, chapters, fiction, mysteries, horrors, fantasies, or whatever else. I can't say I'm very good at poetry, though, so I do suggest going to someone else for that.

I write/read fantasy and science fiction, so that is, naturally, what I am best at, in addition to any essays or non-fiction. I prioritize Green Room works, and if the piece is long it may be bumped a bit because I need more time for it.

See you all on the mighty battlefield of the Green Room and the Fields of All Literary,

-Featherstone of the Knights of the Green Room

Could you please review my essay for me? It is due soon and I need feedback quickly.
Why I Want to Go to Japan

Thank you so much!

Hey,
I'm just a lonesome writer looking for a reviewer for my work. It's a project I started 3 years ago, but it went on hiatus after I started university. I read it through and edited it a bit, but now I think I need some new insight.
Thanks in advance
Gods and Kings: Fury of the Desert -Chapter 1- ongoing-

Done! Enjoy!

Hi I have a story named Return to Oblivion Draft that i would like for you to review/critique. It includes the prologue and the first chapter. Thanks in advance

I have the Exordium and first six chapters of my book sitting in the green room. Sounds like they'd be right up your ally.

The Carpenter - Exordium of Shattered Crowns

Sally - Chapter One of Shattered Crowns

Wylfred - Chapter Two of Shattered Crowns

The Duchess - Chapter Three of Shattered Crowns

The King of Winter - Chapter Four of Shattered Crowns

Daegar - Chapter Five of Shattered Crowns

The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns

Hey @CarryOnMrCaulfield,

This is closed. Unfortunately I couldn't figure out how to post that on the tag, so here I am now explaining. After this I'll just make a post that says 'closed.' Shoulda done that earlier. Sorry. At any rate, when I eventually open this up again I will be happy to look through those.

Good luck writing!

Apologies,

Feather

Hey there, Featherstone! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!