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@Lael I think that an actual terrorist group would be an interesting twist, and it would add another reason why the police were searching the train. We just need to find a way to make them more involved with the story.

It could be just a car full of bombs and advanced weaponry that had been outlawed recently. So our heroes could be pegged as being involved with some sort of black market.




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Dang. Sorry that took so long and sorry for any mistakes. I'll be going back and editing it soon, but If you want to get the gist of what happens, you can go ahead and read now.




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Alright everyone now that Fanty has posted I would like to keep the ball rolling and post next. I will try to have my post up tomorrow and I would love it if I could get a volunteer then to post next. It would be great if whoever posts after me could get their post up this week.

Thanks guys!

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Would you like the next good person to include a reason to get our characters up and moving
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I think we were planning to do the whole framed for terrorism thing.




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Yeah as long as that idea is okay with everyone.

EDIT: In my post I am going to reference the fact that a terrorist group exists but together we need to pick a name for the group and for the city they have arrived in. Please post your suggestions and then we can vote.

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Make a poll
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I don't know how to make a poll. If you could message me instructions or something like that I would greatly appreciate it.

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Is it too late to join? I want to make a super cool android character. I've read all the posts and character profiles etc.
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Go ahead we would love to have you @CoffeeCat! I can't wait to see what you come up with.
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Who's Grunge and Actress and General?
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Grunge is Tereza.
General is Ash.
Actress is Ivonne.
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Yay! I'll start writing a chapter :)

Um... I also made a list of all the characters and 'anime-style' images of their descriptions (to help me wrap my head around it all). I though it might help you guys as well, so here it is:

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Mason or 'Lion' (@Oswin1800)
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Tereza or 'Grunge' (@nickelgotyourback)
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Ash or 'General' (@Poopsie)
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Chaser or 'Shark' (@Chaser)
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Sivv or 'Mouse' (@StupidSoup)
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Clover or 'Azure' (@Oswin1800)
Image(I gave her horns because you said she "usually has a tail or appendage of another animal from her powers")

Ivvone or 'Actress' (@Lael)
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Alder or 'A' (@TheFantasy14)
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Electra (@CoffeeCat)
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I feel like I got Sivv totally wrong haha. I tried my best to make them all as you described, however if I got nicknames mixed up or the pictures are wrong in some way just PM me and I can edit it.
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Ayyy I like that site @CoffeeCat! Though I'm not sure Ivonne looks entirely right. I think the nose would more be like the 1st one in the selection and the eyes shouldn't be that slanted. Her eyes are big, though they do need to carry that irritated look. ;) But good job! :)
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@Lael @Oswin1800 Okay I updated you characters. Check 'em out! If they're still not to your pleasing just let me know.
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