PMD: Seventeen Plates DT

You can go ahead and have your character get the grass plate with Frost. What I have planned involves outside the mystery dungeon, in the jungle. And NPC's are wholeheartedly encouraged.

Ok then!
@Verser still planning to get the heck out of there? I'll follow without problem.

Yeah!

Crobat is dead though, so after you come back from the fight ill take you and run or something, and maybe we'll head back to where I broke free of the carriage and grab the supply crates that haven't been blown up (thinking they are....food or something) and go toooo.......somewhere. Idk we'll think of something

Ok then. I stopped my writing just to be sure, I'll keep goin'.
Ah. Well at least that's confirmed. GOOD. One more enemy down.
Sure thing, I got an idea anyway, that I should be able to pull off for this post. If not, welp, you can do it anyways, so everything's fine. I'll edit my comment once it's posted.

EDIT: POSTED AT LAST. @Verser You can go ahead and take that Dawn Stone. I'mma go to sleep now.

I am double-posting for the sake of attracting attention. yes I'll say that every time, just in case.

@Verser so my internet crashed and has NOT managed to caryy on his function (AKA: working) until now. Luckily, most of my text has been saved, so I'll resume writing. Deeply sorry for the delay.

lol its totally fine bro

@Verser Yeah, sorry. Always frustrating when that happens :/
Just finished posting though, so yeah. Hope it's worth the read

Wonderful post@Tortwag. You certainly understand the make up of a Pokemon story. Also, that plot twist at the end, KILLER. Just be sure to read through your posts before posting them. I'm very excited to work with you! (Or Twinkiel, as the story has it)

yeah bruh great job ^3^ I guess I'll go ahead and post! Here we go into the Great Crevasse? (or whatever its called) to find the Palace of Flames which holds the Flame Plate!

MAN I LOVE THIS SB! It's like an infinitely more complex Mystery Dungeon that reminds me of LOTR because of it's complexity. THERES A WHOLE WORLD OUT THERE!

This a month to develop, And the biggest twists haven't even happened yet. My advice, pay attention to details. Clues to the future are in every one of my posts.

Sounds like Buggy and her commitment to making puns! Yeah, I'll be sure to keep an eye out.

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okay, If you don't like the post @Tortwag i'll gladly change it. I feel like I may have revealed this twist to soon, but I didn't know what else to do.

*sigh* I should stop posting at 12:00 at night

@Charizard821 Or the beginning of my commitment to make references :p I'm having so much fun with Twinkiel's Inner Echo.
Oh, thanks Yeah, I'm proud of that plot twist, I can't wait to expand it to something (maybe) great. And I did re-read my post, despite the little mistakes it still has. Oh, so am I! Can't wait for Riley to evolve, Lucario's an amazing partner. Can't wait to see where the whole thing with Xerneas is leading to.

@15253 To be fair PMD ALWAYS felt that way to me. Wolrd of Pokemon seemed so much complex with this series, and now this SB is another possibility that WE build. That's just perfect!

@Verser I just want to point out some vital infos that you might want to correct.
-Ariala might eventually insist on going to the place where Frost was, but um... Celebi herself said that it was their next destination anyway. So they went there because Celebi asked. Not Ariala.
-This one's for everyone that uses Twinkiel: his Inner Echo triggers usually on words, images or sounds. In the image case (AKA seeing evolutionary stones), Twinkiel would automatically give GENERAL infos of the object he sees, and would be specific only if he needs to. So he wouldn't mention the use of the Dawn Stone on a Snorunt until one would stand in front of him. Just lettin' you know
-I read Obamasnow the first time, which made my day. That aside, no: Snorunt doesn't evolve into Abomasnow. Snorunt (when female) evolves into Froslass. You might want to google the pokemon evolutions every time just to be sure, I do that sometimes.
-That's something you can't know unless you've read it in Bulbapedia, but um... Twinkiel doesn't suffer from cold AT ALL XD His fleece actually protects him from the cold, and if it's too hot, it apparently absorbs air for him to stay cool. so yeah.
Sorry if I sound like nitpicking, I usually save this kind of comments for reviews, but considering Pokemon always have specific infos (especially regarding the evolutions and items and stuff), I pointed it out. Hope it helps!


Oh. Oh snap, you're right, this twist was revealed... waaaaaaay too soon. But you know what? Don't fret about it. Sb is all about adapting oneself to other people, and I'll do just that. There is ONE thing I ask you to delete/change: could you please remove the part where Twinkiel tells Frost about what his Inner Echo told him? Let's just say they see a random Gengar stading there and assume that he's a spy who work for the New Order, but Twinkiel doesn't make the link yet between him and Ariala yet. Your post actually gave me a great idea.

@Verser, I have to object about Mt. Icewind being that close to the Greatwood Jungle. (In fact, I think @Robusto, @15253, @Charizard821, @Buggiedude2340, and @Tortwag should also participate in this discussion.) If it takes less than a day to get from a tropical rainforest, which can only be located close to the equator of any world, to that world's "arctic circle," it means that you can walk from the north pole to the south pole in three days.

So, my first issue is with a the distance between locations. My second is with the location of the terrains themselves. I don't know about everyone else, but is the Palace of Tides and Cobalt Bay on the east coast of the continent that acts as this SB's setting, or on the west coast? And where are the terrains in relation to each other? As far as I know, Mt. Providence is south of the Land of the Dead, which borders on the Northern Plains, and I know the Marsh of Light is north of the Greatwood Jungle, but where is everything else?! My character is safe in the north, but how should I know what to do if he needs to leave?

My last issue is with the time. Clearly, days have passed since Frost first passed out, yet I still have to write Gabriel's post which is supposed to take place directly after Riley's. I mean seriously, we can't have different characters be at different times in the SB, not unless time-travelling is involved (which it isn't).

This SB started extraordinarily fast, but perhaps a bit too fast. I suggest that we completely stop posting before the above-mentioned matters have been resolved, since they don't affect just me, but each one of us. Also, it's not necessary to make a post everyday, so we could we just wait for other members to catch up? I am overjoyed at the enthusiasm everyone is showing, but maybe we need to step on the brakes just a little - as much as I like this SB, I have other affairs as well.

Your responses?