PMD: Seventeen Plates DT

Good luck.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand, posted.
... *realizes he didn't spellchecked.* I... guess I'll be fine. Anyways, so, long post and full of dialogues, but it's mostly an introduction of Twinkiel's character. Normally I'll post another one tomorrow and things will actually advance. I hope you've enjoyed, as I'm goin' to bed.

EDIT: Wow. It wasn't that long, actually. Huh. I might edit it and add the next part tomorrow then, 'cause few things happened so far.

I'll post seeming that my last one was short and quite useless :\ I guess we'll be descending into the Chasm! (will save wild pokemon attack for later.)

I've already got something planned out for the jungle area. And I've realized that there aren't as many areas as I'd like, so i'll be posting some more descriptions for some new areas I've come up with. (But characters can't appear in these places)

@Robusto Oh. Well, I have two possibilities: or I join the main group near the Crevice for the explorin' part, or I join Riley, Gabriel and Flarry in the Northern Plains' village. What should I do? Kinda like both paths, personally. I'll think about it, but I'm open to any suggestion towards what group I should join first.

@Tortwag, I assume Cresselia will want Celebi to report in as soon as your character is found.

Gabriel, Riley and Flurry are in the north because Articuno is one of the Legendaries who are searching for Xerneas, Gabriel was hidden there, and Shaymin can't really help. So, they're in the north because they have to keep safe (though you wouldn't say that, considering all the risks that trio is taking and still has to take).

Ren and Zulu (and Frost, once he escapes) are out searching for Plates because they have the abilities and 'Monpower to do so. Finding the Plates is their primary objective.

Therefore, if you seek adventure, then Cresselia will tell you to join them. If you want to hide in the north (and play diplomat), then Cresselia will send you to Frostpoint. The former seems the more likely case though.

And great post, @Charizard821 - you're right, I do like it!

@AstralHunter I just read the new posts: Frost is currently in the forest and broke free, which means that I can even bring him with me to the other groups if we actually get out, or look for the plate that's located where we are.
And yes, seeking adventure would suit Twinkiel the most, considering he evolves easily. Soooo... I guess him and Frost can try and get the plate in the jungle while Celebi eventually makes her report.

@AstralHunter did you catch the thing I placed in there that you recommended from Tale of a Charmander way back in Chapter 2?

The part where you can actually die in the Pokéverse and not just faint? The part where Pokémon eat other Pokémon? The part where you end your sentences with a full stop (period) even though a "he/she/it said" appendage follows?

Spoiler

I'm pulling your leg! Yes, I remember suggesting Trevenants as guardians of the forest in my review for chapter three. Points for taking the initiative.

Change of plans: @Buggiedude I guess you and the others can get the dawn stone yourselves. @Tortwag, I guess i'm gonna take you back to the Great Crevice, unless you have other plans.

I actually had a question. So I know that if you want to indicate someone speaking midway through their speech you use a comma. But what if you want to indicate speech at the end of a sentence. (He said, she said, etc.)

Don't forget to be including the shards of Palkia's orb at the entrances to each plate area. If you need each shard's description, send me a message and I'll send the description.

@Verser I... Actually planned to take the plate with you while we were there, but then again I do recall @Robusto mentioning having plans for that part, so I guess I'll just follow you. Oh and by the way, Yes Robusto please send me the description of Palkia's orb shards, it'll be useful for me.

...However... I MIGHT have a way to get a dawn stone for you guys, especially since Frost was captured by the New Order INSIDE the Jungle. I just need to find myself a bag, first.

Can't go to the Mt.Providence on my own anymore, since you're here. Oh well. I'll start writing and figure somethin' out for now.

@Tortwag, but I broke free and passed out in a snake den (HINT HINT)

To get the Dawn Stone we'd have to have a reason to traverse across the northern planes to Mt Providence when we don't even know that Buggiedude exists. What would be the reason to enter Mt Providence?

@Verser Yes, I noticed.
*catches hint*

Good point.
Oooooooooor, the Crobat and his minions MAAAAY have brought some supply boxes with them that we MIGHT eventually find while being chased by said Crobat assuming that he eventually comes back (or surviving minions, as we can imagine a few more could patrol the area. Who would guard a potential threat to the New Order without a few extra guards?).
And said boxes might EVENTUALLY contain evolutionary stones.
That Twinkiel MIGHT EVENTUALLY want to take with him.

'Cause you know. Profit.

That's one of the ideas I have in mind, maybe I can use it. Not sure if I'm being creative here, or simply too crazy about getting that Dawn Stone. Maybe both. If I'm more in the latter side, please excuse me. I'll just abandon the idea.
really wanna see a Froslass though...

EDIT: forgot to ask. @Robusto Are NPCs encouraged, or not?