Young Writers Society

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Hi! First off, this is a really good idea you have here! I like the way you start this out by describing something that the character likes. I also love ...

a face like a colon and a vertical line, a cut rope bridge, a star in the sky exhilaration

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the review? Top Graham Cracker - William and Taurael are going to the forest, where ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William and Taurael get healed by Alvane, who ...

A young college girl meets a young college guy that she is NOT on good terms with and has to be tutored by, will they fall for or hate each other.

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Taurael is the Lady of the Lake, Morgan ...

Research Notes: Corporate Sales Notes: TBD What kind of product does the protagonist sell? -> Idea: Security Solutions sold by someone who doesn't appear to be trustworthy? Why does the ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the spooky S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Another demon waits to attack, William and Taurael ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This was quite a fun tale to read ...

please, no love triangles *gasp* XD Personally, I don't think there are 'bad' cliches that need to be avoided. Instead, there are just tropes that are frequently done poorly, which ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon who is going to drop a review/comment about your piece. So, let's get started! I like the flow of how your poem goes. The rhyming patterns ...

Hey, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a little comment or review. First of all, I do like the neatness of each verse and I like the ...

Dragonight is back for another chapter of this amazing book! That upon which my dragon's eye fixed From the sudden outburst, Leiytning barely restrained himself from unsheathing a weapon. I ...

The Apothecaries inspect the clinic and have a few... disagreements.

DISCLAIMER!!! I wana share reference photos on here, that i have used/am using. But Just a quick disclaimer, everyone is the pictures is fully covered, most/some in a bathing suit-like ...