Young Writers Society

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Congrats!!!!!! You deserve it!!!!

Kita witnesses a *futile* fight...

Everyone looks for a purpose, nobody finds it. Few realise you have to make it. At times, I feel like I'm just drifting on the open sea, endlessly.

This is Madeleine, from my song “Welcome to Richardson, I’m your only friend (Madeleine’s song)”.

Starting off, I really enjoyed your poem, on the surface it may seem like a simple little poem, but once you read it and think about it, there’s a deeper ...

To start out, I really liked this piece of writing, it tells a story. I especially liked the metaphor in the beginning (pretty sure that’s the correct terminology) of “Snow ...

Hii!!! Welcome to YWS. Oh! YOU’RE ALL MINE AS LONG AS I LIVE, I SAY AS I WATCH YOU FROM A DISTANCE - This line took my heart! Being a ...

a sequel to Circus Freak, Circus Rose, Circus Marionette, Circus Petals, Circus Story, Circus Jester, and Circus Dream

Two visitors make their appearance in Selethon

Mordred appears, and everything goes wrong

Dang, what a bitter sweet ending. When I smiled: This was an emotional rollercoaster. Given what you normally write, I half expected for Theodore to actually be a bad guy. ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The narrator’s Jester left her, and flowers have ...

Hi!!! Dropping in for a quick review here! I want to start out by saying that I really loved your story, your imagery in gorgeous and the narrative flows beautifully. ...

OMG! I'm utterly stunned by the story full of vivid metaphors and the complexities in it. Truth be told, the first part of this story deeply resonated within my heart ...