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Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Oooo, interesting first chapter! I can only wonder what this story will be like continuing forward. It seems there is a mysterious ghostlike figure stealing ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Woah! This chapter certainly had a lot of great moments! Josephine watched with teary eyes as thunder cracked outside of the shed, causing her to ...

Hi, I'm Swifite13 and I'm reviewing your work today. First of all, I liked this story even though I didn't understand it all the way. What was the point of ...

A Prolouge for my new story! :)

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase knew that she was more than just a wise deity. Jase knew that there was some sort of resilience and savagery that stayed cloaked ...

Hey, KaeRae here! Just wanted to review your story while I was reading it. First of all, I don't have a fear of chickens, but the way you described them ...

else i am to cry i think you should tear my tears away

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The healers, thank gods, were able to successfully remove all roots and growths from her brain, only leaving a few in Persephone’s lungs. Good to ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase glanced around them and rolled his eyes as a group of men cheered at a table closer to the bar. A small, petite, brunette ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary He was created by magic, therefore smashing all the odds that he really was a dickface like all the other kin of the sea. As ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary a long strand of blackness extending from his fingertips to the book Josephine was looking at. The LORE, so yummy. I liked the section where ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The whole scene with Persephone, and this chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions. Especially the scene with Persephone and Josephine having a heartfelt conversation.

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone hesitated but closed her eyes, her chestnut silken locks falling from the intricate bun that Josephine had spent hours working on for her. Among ...

Thank you for all the great responses! I find, nowadays, that fully planning out a story burns me out by the end. I had fully planned out a story which ...

This poem talks about a fear I have had since I was around the age of 2. A bad experience with this creature has made me fearful of its presence.

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Wrath + Pride’s army arrives. In addition to ...