Young Writers Society

Congrats, human!

Starting off, I really enjoyed your poem, on the surface it may seem like a simple little poem, but once you read it and think about it, there’s a deeper ...

To start out, I really liked this piece of writing, it tells a story. I especially liked the metaphor in the beginning (pretty sure that’s the correct terminology) of “Snow ...

Hii!!! Welcome to YWS. Oh! YOU’RE ALL MINE AS LONG AS I LIVE, I SAY AS I WATCH YOU FROM A DISTANCE - This line took my heart! Being a ...

a sequel to Circus Freak, Circus Rose, Circus Marionette, Circus Petals, Circus Story, Circus Jester, and Circus Dream

Two visitors make their appearance in Selethon

Mordred appears, and everything goes wrong

Dang, what a bitter sweet ending. When I smiled: This was an emotional rollercoaster. Given what you normally write, I half expected for Theodore to actually be a bad guy. ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The narrator’s Jester left her, and flowers have ...

Hi!!! Dropping in for a quick review here! I want to start out by saying that I really loved your story, your imagery in gorgeous and the narrative flows beautifully. ...

OMG! I'm utterly stunned by the story full of vivid metaphors and the complexities in it. Truth be told, the first part of this story deeply resonated within my heart ...

Your poem is deeply moving and filled with heartfelt emotions. The imagery you use, like the sweet cats kiss and the cup of Boston Tea, adds a touch of sweetness ...

Your poem is incredibly powerful and evocative. The way you express your emotions and thoughts through your words is truly captivating. I can feel the depth of your feelings and ...

Have you ever been in a relationship where you feel like everything you do to try and connect with someone they just keep getting farther away?

Lonely Today's Inspiration: Today's song was Lost.../...Out Past Saturn by Chaz Cardigan. I rolled a refrain word poem along with dealer's choice. I was loosely inspired by the lyric, "Are ...

As the room goes dim and you feel yourself drifting off, your words beautifully capture the experience of entering a different realm of consciousness. It's fascinating how this state can ...