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For the first time, Kazimir had the thought that maybe something was genuinely wrong with him. It wasn't the first time the thought had passed through his head, of course. ...

Hi Damian, welcome to YWS - hope you are enjoying the site so far! Here to review your story! Dialect I think the last time I read story with this ...

i wish you well Song: wish you well - Wrabel I rolled a 1 (freeverse) and a 4 (dealers choice: song title inspiration) wishingwell.jpg you grinded my bones into thin ...

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a quick review. Props to both of you for creating a very honest and reflective piece. By the way, ...

Hello my fellow writer! Let's get started. Okay. So first off, I wanted to state how really impressively written this was! The metaphor of loneliness... very well done! You make ...

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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was a rather adorable little tale ...

Someone finds themself floating in nothingness, and reminisce about a kind of loneliness.

for reference see: bigger than the whole sky

Hi! Dragon back for another review! This one looks like it's going to be a doozy. That upon which my dragon's eye fixed When she saw an ominous white ring, ...

I had a random burst of inspiration the other day.

Bella and the black box what can i say.

Wow, I gotta say, this story was a wild ride from start to finish! Let me break it down for you. First off, that prologue had me hooked right away. ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the spooky S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The merfolk waited for Taurael to come back ...

Hi herbalhour! Not sure how such a cool poem is still around in the Green Room :0 but I'm glad I bumped into it! I agree with Ellie below on ...

➥First impressions💗: Short and sweet. It was an adorable read that sets a cosy scene, loved the interactions between the characters felt like a genuine brother and sister moment. A ...