Young Writers Society

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I wanted to preface here about why I have lots of recommendations for you. I understand you make your edits based ...

Hello, My Friend! Oooou, a song about Crepuscule? Awesome!! I really enjoyed this whole song, and the context behind it! The idea of a jealous Crepuscule in a maddened state, ...

Hey, hey!! Just going through the green room and stumbled upon this piece. And WOW!! What a gem!! The first sentence instantly had me intrigued. I loved your word choice ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary This place and time was grey-coated in a layer of water, cloud cover indicating it had ...

Rose -> Roxanne

Laverna Her Ship, above Wayland A lady sat in a comfortable seat on her ship as she thought about her life. Since leaving Mandalorian space she’d been trying to process ...

A collection of five poems, randomly chosen and mixed up, written over the course of a year. (I should stop choosing titles that make no sense-)

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I have arrived to check out your awesome story! The name alone had me interested, and you always do great reviews ...

Hello Again, My Friend! I'd like to continue my review of this great story with the next chapter! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh heh... What The Black Eyes ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Verena gains new information from the Princess’ society, ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “Now, your. Mission. Is to go through this time portal” The reveal that they have to ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hi, Tesla! Ljungtroll here with a review. This is a very sweet poem, and the feelings you/the speaker have for this boy come through clearly. I like the bluntness of ...

Josefina’s Grandpa (shadow with eyes and hands) (from my story “Josefina’s only wish”):

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! HELLO THERE! I stumbled upon this piece of work and decided to drop a review. This was posted quite some ...

Nice poem written by the author. "All those days I felt worthless, Came back to the surface." The feeling of being unhappy about whatever is happening with you is an ...