~Volant~

Hm....I've narrowed it down to three. Twilight series. All of it. :p Dragons of Autumn Twilight. or something like that. Rapid mood changes, cheesy lines, no flow, and a baaaaad ...

Yay, I finally found time!!! XD sorry it took so long! I enjoyed it a lot; it's really hard to introduce that many characters at once and be sure that ...

Haha I do to, but even when I read InkHeart I always imagined Dustfinger with black hair. so maybe it is just me haha. I always imagined him with redish-brown ...

Personally, I didn't like it. They made me laugh because I couldn't take them seriously. And he kept interupting the story, which tends to bug me. :/ I used to ...

Hey, RJ! This was a good read. I like the idea and the story and the characters, You're pretty good at your age, because when I was thirteen, my writing ...

All in all, I liked it. I liked it a lot. It could use some cleaning up; info dumps and some imagery and flow issues. I can tell, though, that ...

Hey, Vox! How's it going? First off, it's way too fast. I feel like yanking on the reins. I don't know anything about this tribe, anything about this girl, anything ...

Omg, I'm excited about this story! I don't see fanfictin though....what's it a fanfic of? Now, just as a warning, I'm not usually a very nice reviewer. But I mean ...

Sorry, it took forever to get the review!! :( I'm really sorry!! *huggles* Aw....omg! This is really good! I only have one thing to say: [quote=kittykat]Then it shatters, blowing up! ...

Warning; I'm not usually a very nice reviewer...haha. I'm also a major grammar nazi. Just thought I'd warn you. Anyway: I wasn’t borne in the city; I drew my first ...

haha I'm pretty new at scripts, so bear with me. Hope I can help. Great idea. I like the concept and enjoyed this very much I just didn't see any ...

Haha interesting. I like the idea, too! You're giving way too much away in the prologue, though...lol. Perhaps we should learn who these people are later? It hasn't even been ...

Wow....this was really good. I agree with Sam; tell us a little bit more where she is. I didn't even realize this was WWII until Sam mentioned it. There is ...

Not quite sure what to think of it. It's not what I expected. It's really well written, and I'll have to think about this story for a while....well done, mate, ...

Yikes! Mate, do you realize how fricken long this is? Haha. Break it down into parts; you’ll get more reviews. First off, I’ve noticed you don’t like commas all that ...