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Re: Failure
Hello Bravo! Oh my gosh, what a poem. This is so deep and true. I absolutely love it. And I have the exact same feelings right now and they couldn't ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: The Angelic letters
Hi there I like this, a lot. Wow. Your vocabulary is magnificent, I feel like I am watching a movie when I read this. I can tell you are really ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: A New Chapter
Hi there. This will be my first shot at reviewing a short story so here goes :) I will start with what I did not like. So, I get what ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Loudā„
Hello I think this is a cute poem. It is actually really good. The emotions are true as the words are. I mean these are issues that affect us a ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: All That Matters
Hi there Um, this is different. It sure is deep and I like it. This is a very short and simple piece and I think it's great. The idea behind ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: My Heart Flutters
:D Sweet. That is what I would call it, sweet and short and it demands attention. I felt that this was the right approach for this particular topic, right and ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Moment
Hi there Well, alright before I get to the song, the title is a problem :D ; for me at least. It does not do the wonderful lyrics underneath any ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Caged Bird
Hi there. First of all, what an interesting introduction :D Alright, now for the review. I enjoyed the poem generally. You have executed imagery well. I myself actually feel caged ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: stars and palms
Hello Well, this poem has potential and I sort of liked it. The problems I had was that it was not enough. It's too short. The poem talks about your ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: whistle me wayward
Hey Um, sorry, but I am kind of lost here. The first line says something else and then we are at trees? :? I really do not understand what is ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: What is a poem? Edited
Hello Oh, so there are two poems here? If it is only one poem then I will consider them as two poems because that's what it looks like...and I'll have ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Love Hurts
Hi OK, I know that it is totally irrelevant, but these lyrics are totally cute. They are just effortlessly cute. I think you did a great job here. The words ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Gory Answer
Hello, Humph...well, I spotted some spelling mistakes which is sometimes a turn off. My suggestion would be to read over the poem again. The second problem I have is with ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: A Romantic Mistake
Hi. I love it, love it! The writing is excellent. The imagery, you go girl! I mean every single line just drew me in, I almost hit my head on ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Don't remind me(previously titled idek)
Humph! Maybe it is the title. The poem is fine. It is one of those general "why" poems about love. It is well written, the only big problem I have ...
May 14, 2010
