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Hello Supreet159 I shall review your poem today. First off, may I suggest posting your pieces in regular font, not all bold, it makes for an unsightly work and just ...

Blue rubies hit the nail on the head. except for one detail that is missing, A Sonnet is the iambic pentameter. The way you use the Iambic Pentameter is what ...

Hello again TheWriters! Time for me to review once again! :D First of all, I still love were the story is heading! In the future could you be more specific ...

hello Kimmy :) I was going to review this piece, but I realized I really couldn't. their isn't much here to be perfectly honest, This seems like more of a, ...

Hello TheWriters! :) I will be reviewing your story today. I can see a review has already been posted, so I will mention some other things I noticed :) First ...

Nice work KamKam :) I really enjoy this poem. For writing it in your sleep, it is really good. I am no expert on poetry but I think this is ...

Hello okkervilpuddle! Well, first things first. This story actually caught my attention early on, which is a plus. Your description was nice, but as the story went on, I began ...

Okay! Overall I thought this excerpt was great! The detail was nice and steady. Not to fast, but not to slow. I enjoyed reading it :) Nit Picks I didn't ...

Here we go random! :) I loved the preface, their are a few things here I noticed though. Nit Picks This is the story of me, Alex Lioh. Is the ...

First off I'm very excited to read more of this, It caught my attention extremely fast! Nit Picks He extended one finger and beckoned me to come forward; toward him. ...

Alright! Like everyone else has mentioned, This is a great excerpt. It caught my attention very quickly, and I enjoyed reading it. In fact I ready it 4 times over! ...

Hello! This is my first Review on YWS so I apologize if I mess up anywhere! :mrgreen: First of all I truly enjoyed reading this piece! I enjoy were the ...