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zeppy♥yozora

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Other Side of the Looking Glass (Chapter 1)

    thanks i couldnt figure out how to italisize... i didn tknow i needed to highlight it first lol xD.

    Jun 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I hate who i am

    heheheheh... i feel stupid... what's a rant?

    Jun 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Jerk

    OMG!!!!!!!! this was SOOOO good! I really think it captures what a dictator (or just the leader of the "popular" kids) is like ,and how you are just fed up ...

    Jun 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Lullaby

    omg! i LOVE this!

    Jun 14, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Shiku

    As I walk into the house I see Axel “Axel, what are you doing to the poor Omė?” I asked him What's an Ome? And the way you wrote it ...

    May 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: teens

    great job :D

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I once had a cat named Sammi

    lol scary part is she actually did smile at me once... in fact she teleported on numerous occasions...not joking

    Apr 19, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ballad Of Maryling And Christian

    some parts were repetitive lovers not meant for this world and it didnt really flow... but other than that it was good! :)

    Apr 19, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Dreamer's Reality

    wow... this reminds me of something Edgar Allen Poe would write (that is a good thing) :D

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dejection

    dang!! this is really good! very sad and depressing ... i like it! 8)

    Apr 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Clean Bite--Chapter 1 part 1

    YAY gewd story :D

    Apr 16, 2008


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