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Hello again kayfortnight, I'm baaaaaack, So here we have chapter 2, eh? I like the concept going here, certainly funny, but I couldn't help but get confused in this chapter. ...

Hello kayfortnight! It is I! Your *cough* rather late *cough* Secret Santa! Now, to the review. I think this is a great opener. Though I'm not sure what the plot ...

Hey nmk1128, First of all, wow, you have a lot going on here, a little too much I think, but we'll get to that. Overall I think this has potential. ...

Hi Aria, Somehow I seem to have stumbled upon this fine piece of work (because you definitively did not give it to me in chat). Let me start by saying ...

Hey Breshae, Zephion here, preparing to review this nifty little poem of yours. I would lime to star by saying that I like the theme of this piece, but I ...

Hey Andrew, Zephion here with a review for you! I'd like to star by saying that I envy you. I lack the ability to write poetry and the power to ...

Hey Sherlock, Zephion reporting for duty, here to review this piece for you. Let me star by saying that I really like this. It was a sweet short little story, ...

Hey there spinelli, Zephion here, to give you a review in order to make a great piece better. The thing that I like the most here is that it's almost ...

Hey jalmoc, Zephion here, preparing to review this for you. First of all, I'd like to say that this title made me SO happy. That is just an awesome title. ...

Hey AwesomeSauce, This is Zephion, here to review this great piece of yours. First of all, I like the idea, it's a lot like Toy Story, but that's okay, writing ...

Hi leaseal, Zephion here, prepared to review this great piece here. First, I'd like to say that the ideas were there. You had good things today and you've obviously given ...

Hello dacoozed, Zephion here, reviewing this fine piece of writing you have here. I really like what you've done here, it is well written and I like your style. My ...

Hello Blakesink, I am here to review this wonderful little piece of yours. My first comment is on the content of the piece. I like what you have here, but ...

Hey Jalmoc, First, I'd like to say that this is a neat little piece you have going and I like it a lot. Your imagery and use of adjectives is ...

Hello once again cm57105, And once again, this poem awes me. This was exactly what I had in mind! You once again did a great job. The only thing I ...