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Okay, this is just all kinds of awesome. I love your style of writing, for a reason I can't quite identify. It's sort of soothing, in a way. Somehow, it ...

Late! Again! What the heck is wrong with me? “Are ye jus’ gon’ stan’ there ‘n’ worshi’ me c’ling o’ are ye gon’ say summat?” ...Okay, I know Clyde is ...

You think this is a bad start? ... *Looks at her own Chapter One* ... *goes off to cry in a corner* *Recovers from sudden, overwhelming feeling of hopelessness* In ...

Sorry for the late review-- things have been kind of crazy at school lately. Frankly, I can't find much to criticize in this chapter. The whole thing was very well ...

Wow, this was a great beginning, too. I always envy people who are good at beginnings, the beginning is one of my many fatal weaknesses. XD The magic infused glass ...

Ooh, I really liked this first chapter, it pulled me into the story, got me interested right away. I want to read more! As for edits... Uhm... Because in a ...

Wow. That was awesome, Razor. Whole new levels of pure awesome. I absolutely loved it. I adore the title, by the way. I did think there were a few sentences, ...

Ooh, this was pretty good. ^_^ I really liked your beginning, it pulled me in immediately, made me interested. I really liked your characters, I'm impressed with how you managed ...

Hey there! I don't read this kind of story very often, so I can't offer much over whether it was cliche or not, but I'll have you know that I ...

Hey there! Looks like you're new to YWS, welcome! Ooh, I'm intrigued. This is a pretty strong beginning. I'm very curious to hear more about your characters, I can't wait ...

Okay! Sorry for my lateness, my internet randomly gave up on life last night, and was only reluctantly resurrected this afternoon. There was a series of events that led to ...

Hi there! This is a pretty good start, I'm really interested to see what happens next and learn more about your characters! I really like Skye, she seems like an ...

More lateness on my part, I'm so sorry! OTL There were all of three customers – myself and Catty included. The third man wasn’t a customer at all, rather a ...

Firstly, that was a great piece. I love your mention of things such as the guy at Dunkin' Doughnuts and the way he was filling the cups, or the teenagers ...

Oh, poor Carolina... once again, you do an absolutely awesome job of helping us get to know and identify with your characters. The lunch monitor on duty stormed over to ...