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Thank you Rituparna! (Especially your thing about the atom!)

Thank you Rituparna!

Thank you, Widdershins!

Thank you Hope!

Thank you CapitalMonday! I will certainly take what you said into consideration.

Thank you CapitalMonday! I agree wholeheartedly that my phrasing is awkward in certain places, and will edit it now!

Good writing, Labrador, this is beautiful and I love how you used colors to symbolize people and the narrator's emotions regarding those people! Very good, very very good, and can't ...

Great job Cinder! The emotions are poignant, prose is good, message is strong and relatable--I really don't have any criticisms. Only nitpick--(and this has been said before) is about the ...

Thank you so much Tennishead--I agree the sentences are too comma-ridden and will work on changing that.

Thank you Elder One!!!

Thank you so much Flite for your comments! Happy Review Day! Go Smaug!

No problem :)

Oh your welcome! Happy review day too! :)

Thank you so much Lycando for your review! Looks like I do need to open up that grammer textbook again!

Thanks Void!