zalarus

i like this one a lot more than your other pieces. i'm not even sure there's a specific reason why. it's just a tragic story told well. you've proved yourself ...

ew. not only do i dislike the way you executed this poem, i dislike the entire premise behind it. heh, once again, i find myself agreeing with galerius and errtu2. ...

to everyone out there: i'd really appreciate it if more people reviewed this, or at least gave your thoughts on it. i didn't post this just for the sake of ...

i think that it's only this one that i put in parentheses. but i did it because i read a poem by ken kesey, and i thought that it was ...

i actually enjoyed that a lot, which is uncommon for me on these forums. it sounds like the beginning of a dark fairy tale. keep up the good work like ...

i actually thought this one was pretty good, and i can appreciate the sentiment behind it. i agree that punctuation is needed. adrian's alternative was pretty good. keep up the ...

does that somehow change your opinion of me/the piece? i hope it doesn't. your viewpoint was valid and your criticism was pretty much accurate.

i know that i say this a lot, but there is not much artistry or purpose in this piece. i can't really say much about it. sorry.

i see where you're coming from, adrian. it's definitely not one of my better ones. although really, all the embellishments came naturally. i wrote this about substances to be honest, ...

this one was really- i don't know what to say, i just can't think of a word to describe this, except that it is a good piece of poetry. keep ...

i probably wasn't using the term correctly. i meant that you should feel free to use metaphor and literary techniques to make your poems, well, poetic. this right now just ...

i am thinking of trying my hand at prose sometime soon. i am a prodigious reader, and i think that i've read enough to know my way around prose writing. ...

a refreshingly cheerful poem. however, i agree with 'beyond the mask'... it just seemed like a lot of rhyming words. not a lot of purpose behind it. don't let me ...

ah, i did. i read it aloud to her. i'm pleased to say that she was blown away. my heart, it soared. she's a writer herself, although she leans more ...

haha. i laughed. i clicked on it, thinking (maybe hoping?) that it was serious. but i was pleased to find out that it was a joke, and a funny one ...