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Is there anything left to say ? I believe your poem itself has said everything that it is worth :D An amazing piece and the best part is that you ...

Ok. So this is a kind of inspirational poem and It was really good. By the way It seems like a true story :P so yeah If I make any ...

Hi :D Ok well this, is a good poem. There are a lot of things that I couldn't get, firstly what's the poem about ? I cant seem to figure ...

Best one I've read over here :D Really nicely scripted, you didn't need any fancy adjectives or even colors to light up the poem. The sheer truth that you define ...

Awesomely scripted, ok first things first, I adore the poem a lot but It doesn't speak out like your other poems, I think that's because it still lacks some color. ...

Wow. I'm stunned, I've always thought that a writers true skill lies always in how he picks up the reader and makes the reader feel the exact emotions that you ...

The theme rocks. It's awesome, really now. Secondly, the language, the color, the questions all rock. I'm mostly not into these kind of topics but i dont know what kept ...

Ok this is a good, no great piece of writing. The word '' philosophy '' is rightly used here, because it is one. I had to retrace upward again and ...

I really like this effort of yours. :) You've done well here but there seem to be some short comings. Firstly, write more , a little poem like this is ...

First things first , There's no rhyming, sometimes the poem doesn't need rhyming but in this case I have a feeling as a reader that it really did need rhyming. ...

The idea is really nice, as well as the similes and metaphors used in the poem. But there is something lacking, It's maintaining the flow, when you're writing you have ...

Hi, I like the idea portrayed in the poem but you've missed out an essential part, you've got to grab the reader, enthrall him/her, and there's only one way to ...

I really like your ideas and the feeling that you've tried to put in it but try using more color words, words that will light up your poetry, Being plain ...