zackattack

It seemed incomplete to me like you skipped a big part, discuss how the speaker feels about the situation, this will help the character develop into someone we can see ...

This may have not been an original poem, but it's a poem none the less, all ideas come from an existing one, it was a nice sweet poem, if you ...

I really liked this poem, the first stanza was choppy which have problems with myself, I liked how it was a story but at the same time itr was some ...

I love this poem to death it seems like the cold has a great effect on your writing! lol. Every stanza has a certain effect, which your writing style complements, ...

Dark and mysterious, I found it very interesting, you made it seem as though you were the angel of destiny or the grim reaper, this was something different, I got ...

Not many people write like this anymore, I find it refreshing, at first I was some what confused and it seemed as though the more I read the more I ...

A nice poem, a little confusing until then end, but that's always good when your writing from the heart because the hear is confusing, I like that there is no ...

This poem was amazing, it left a lasting impression and made me think. I love your allusion to the Cheshire cat from Alice in wonderland, that was perfect, not many ...

This is interesting, although it makes me wonder what the story is behind it, while reading i couldn't help but hear a slow moving piano, i believe that would cause ...