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  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: Waking up

    Well, meth. This is really awesome. Its kinda demented in a very funny way. The reviewing would be short because trid already covered a lot of the piece. 1) First ...

    Jan 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A sonnet

    This is breathtaking, i have studied sonnets for over a year, and i can assure you they are really hard to master, but you did a wonderful job. Your language ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Bus

    hello there, i am here to give you some of my modest advice for this beautifully written piece of work. First of all your way of writing is really great, ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Win

    "I miss the days when my stories ran as free as a child's laughter on a hot summer day. Like little feet, imprinting themselves into the dry grass of a ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Moonlight

    This is really great, really emotional, and beautifully written, but i have a few tips 1) I think you should increase your descriptions, maybe an overall description of the moon ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Lawful Evil

    Hello vamp, let me say first that i really really enjoyed your short story. Its dark and gloomy mood makes way for the struggle between the forces of evil and ...

    Jan 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Beast: Chapter 1

    Hello buddy. i thought i should read one of your stories and review it. let the reviewing begin. First of all i loved the description and every detail specially in ...

    Jan 27, 2013


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