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I haven't read any of your other work, but this was really very good. The slight choppiness of the poem gave it the awkwardness it needed to correspond to the ...

I've never actually been abducted, but the mood and seriousness of that poem made me feel as if I had. You pulled me into the poem, the forgotten girl, the ...

Wow. This is exactly the kind of thing I'd like to tell some of the people who go to my school, and exactly the kind of thing every kid would ...

This piece kind of sums up how you feel when you say goodbye to a place, or a person, or a time. It reminds me of how I felt when ...

Still looks good. Gary is quite an interesting character. He reminds me of a friend of mine, actually. He has a big heart, but a bit of a temper. He's ...

Wow. This chapter is very well written. I can't really see where you're going with it, but it has me hooked. I can't wait to read the next chapter. It ...