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congrats...you've written a beautiful piece. this story is truly amazing, it appeared to me as very catchy as anyone in a certain age group can relate to it (including me!!). ...

you're a very good writer.i can sense emotions in your writing actually,well to comment on your artwork,i've to read the prev. chapters.but by reading this,i can say that you can ...

you've a written a fine poetry!! i really appreciate your effort...!! but there are some mistakes that i want to point out. first of all,you don't need to put commas ...

this is an awesome piece of literary artwork adriana. and is this your first poem?? well you've done far better than a beginner.congratulations!! i just love this has an intense ...

ver very nice work....,u knw wt..,, "Dancing past the stars I will settle on mars"...this is my fav. line in the whole poem!! this poem actually conveys the message for ...

i think that the title is very relevant..and the plot the poem tells is indeed interesting. but still if you want to come up with a new title..you can have ...

your poem beautifully captures the feeling of alienation and fear when a happy go lucky,jolly kid enters teenage..!(at least that's what i understood) i didn't understand that "%u2019t" thing..,is it ...

first of all,,congratulations...! you've just wrote a very nice and beautiful poem..!!"i am a coward'....yes i am., everyone among us.,have behaved or acted like a coward in 1 point of ...

i think that this is a very nice poem...,,i liked it very much..,,although,to make it clear,one should read it twice..!! in my case,on the 1st time,it really bowled over my ...