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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: ballad of a chair

    ah about the face and the hair, it was mostly for rhyming purposes, and i felt they were both on the head, so why not. if you really need to ...

    May 25, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: she was hers

    consider this poem dishwashed

    May 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: persevere

    Thank you for the review!

    May 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: persevere

    Thank you for the review!

    May 23, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Course of Life

    beautiful imagery, pretty poem, overall 10/10 perfect stanza length, good introduction, wonderful conclusion, i like this poem so much i literally can't form a sentence talking about it ^_^

    May 22, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Chronicles of Carina: Legend of the Nanawars

    LOL

    May 22, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Chronicles of Carina: Legend of the Nanawars

    @Carina

    May 21, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court [Chapter 7]

    Thank you for the review! ahaha i play many sports so i sometimes accidentally switch up the names for goal and hoop :P

    May 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court [Chapter 11]

    Thank ye for the review! I have read everything u said and have stored it within my mind. :))))

    May 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court [Chapter 5]

    Thank you for the review! I'm happy you like my work!

    May 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: don't ever write poetry

    I'm just curious- what makes you think that poetry shows you you can never fly. Ah, I think Mailice explains this perfectly. Also, I think the ending brings a little ...

    May 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court [Chapter 10]

    NOOOOOO I WROTE A LONG COMMENT ANSWERING THIS REVIEW AND IT WAS LOST -yoshi P.S. thank u for the review :]

    May 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: don't ever write poetry

    Thank you for the comment! I appreciate all reviews and comments alike! ^_^

    May 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: don't ever write poetry

    Thankie for da review

    May 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: don't ever write poetry

    thank you SO MUCH for the review! you are SO NICE

    May 1, 2021


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