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cool poem, i love it. i love the pretty snow too. doesnt it make you happy? :D

cheese is good

This was beautiful. You made me cry to remember.

the rainbow glares was in my mind like all different colors of eyes looking at you, like you see a pair of eyes and the change from blue to brown ...

does anyone care to comment? :(

Yeah, this was really nice. I really like it a lot. Great choice of words and a nice flow I think. Why wouldn't you like it? I think it's beautiful.

I thought this was good. I liked the rhyming athough I do have to agree that it does seem a bit forced at places. But over all I thought this ...

Totally cliched and "blured" is spelled blurred.

Yeah that was awesome! You had me fooled too. Really good writing. I'm not so nit-picky so I have no comments other than it was great! :)

I thought this was cool. Good decription and metaphors. Kind of jumpy but it's a good style. I enjoyed this. Great job!

Yeah very cool. I loved this. I just love your idea of capturing autumn in a jar. Awesome, awesome, awesome! Need I say more?

I liked it. Quite original from what I've seen. I liked how you hear only one side of the conversation and then the thoughts from them about it. Very cool. ...

I liked this. I don't know exactly why. Probably partly in the fact that it was sort of mysterious to me. I didn't understand all of it but it sounded ...

I found it really boring. Sorry, but you used an over used topic with hackneyed expressions. You need something with more oomph, more originality. I can't really say I like ...

Yeah it's good and all, I just didn't really understand what was happening. Clear it up and it would be great. I totally agree with glitter there.