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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wanderers: Chapter 1 - A Royal Request

    Hey there , yizhongt here to leave a review. I love fantasy adventure stories, so when I saw yours, I had to read it. Let me say that I'm not ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: Route 26 - Chapter One | Part One

    Hey there , yizhongt here to leave a short review. Let me just start by saying you have a well written piece of work here. I liked the emotions of ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Outlaw - Part Three

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a short review. To be honest with you, I could not find anything wrong with this piece whatsoever. Grammar and spelling wise, you have ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 3

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I enjoyed this piece. The story flowed well and was action packed. The descriptions you ...

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Another Zombie Novel Chapter 1 part 2

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. I must say that this piece you have here is really well written. I enjoyed reading through it very much. The story ...

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Forbidden: Prologue

    Hey there , yizhongt here to leave a short review. Let me just start by saying that I enjoyed the questions you presented to the readers. I felt that it ...

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 3

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a short review. I really enjoyed reading what you have written. I like the entire premise of the story actually. It reminds me somewhat ...

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 2

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I really enjoyed reading this chapter. The descriptions you give and the amount of thought ...

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: .

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that you have a good piece right here. I really enjoyed it. The story flowed well ...

    Jun 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: When Atlas Fell // [Prologue]

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that you got a good start to your story right here. The vocabulary you used in ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I did not find any glaring grammatical or spelling mistakes while reading through your piece ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Realistic Re: Ch.1 First Draft: CypressShade

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. This is a rather short piece of work you got here, but nonetheless it is good. What's especially good about it is ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Clone Wars: Saving a Life

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me start by saying that I truly enjoyed your story. What I like about your story to be exact is how ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1 - Foreign Chick? | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanficton

    Hey there yizhongt here to leave a short review. Let me just start by saying that you are getting off to a good start. As far as I can tell, ...

    May 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Clone Bounty: Kill Them All

    Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let's just say as a fan of Star Wars, it is always nice to see new Star Wars works on the site. ...

    May 25, 2016


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