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Re: The Wanderers: Chapter 1 - A Royal Request
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Jul 4, 2016 -
Re: Route 26 - Chapter One | Part One
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Jul 4, 2016 -
Re: Outlaw - Part Three
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Jul 4, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 3
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I enjoyed this piece. The story flowed well and was action packed. The descriptions you ...
Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: Another Zombie Novel Chapter 1 part 2
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Jul 3, 2016 -
Re: Forbidden: Prologue
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Jul 2, 2016 -
Re: A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 3
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Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 2
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Jun 30, 2016 -
Re: .
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Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: When Atlas Fell // [Prologue]
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Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I did not find any glaring grammatical or spelling mistakes while reading through your piece ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: Ch.1 First Draft: CypressShade
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. This is a rather short piece of work you got here, but nonetheless it is good. What's especially good about it is ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: Clone Wars: Saving a Life
Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me start by saying that I truly enjoyed your story. What I like about your story to be exact is how ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Foreign Chick? | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanficton
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May 26, 2016 -
Re: Clone Bounty: Kill Them All
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May 25, 2016
