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Re: Cutter
Hey, Xanthe here. This poem, to be honest, made me cry... I have many friends who cut and I could relate perfectly to it because I am fighting cutting right ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: YWS
Hey, Xanthe here. I agree with everything on this :3 Its beautiful that you would write something dedicated to YWS :3 It is such a great place and yeah a ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: The Dark Faith - Page 1
Hey, Xanthe here. This is soo sad *sniff sniff* I really like your writing style and your character Belle. It is so sad that she is treated that way by ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: The Fiend
Hey, Xanthe here. I. Absolutely. Loved. This. Really well written. I don't read horror and to be honest... This has been my first time reading horror. I'm really glad I ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: The Ghost
Hey Xanthe here, I don't normally review poetry so I'll try my best. I loved the 3rd verse. I liked how you express the fear all throughout the poem. The ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: The Life of an Assassin - Intro & Ch. 1
Hey, Xanthe here. I like this very much. I personally love assassin stories. *is writing one myself* I personally love this line "No, it's obvious nobody can tell he's danger ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: A Little Piece of You
Hey Xanthe here, I really liked this. The way you did this was really nice. It made you think. It made me feel a bit happier after reading it. It ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Two Purple Flowers
Hey, Xanthe here. I like your idea for this. It's really unique. The story had me glued from the first line. It is sad how the girl is treated horribly ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: On the Edge
Hey, Xanthe here I personally love the song you that you were chosen to write about. To be honest, I have the album it is in and enjoy listening to ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: A Worrisome Heart of Something Great
Hey Xanthe here, I found this quite emotional. I clicked on this because the title was quite different and I was really pleased with what I found. There was so ...
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: A Walk Through the Park - Part 1
Hello, Xanthe here Firstly, Welcome to YWS. I hope u like it here. I know I did when I joined. :D I liked this a lot but it can be ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Preventing The End Of The World i
Hey Xanthe here :) Firstly, I liked how this was done. It was quite different from what I've read before. It also is quite personal to the readers, when you ...
Aug 2, 2013 -
Re: Deaths Angel: The Reunion - Chapter 1
Hey, Xanthe here I really enjoyed this chapter. I really liked how you started off with the letter, I expected it to be Opaline reading it at first but I ...
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
Hey, Xanthe here I really liked this this chapter. It was really good how you managed to put the right amound of description and thought/emotion into it. The starting paragraph ...
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: A Backwards World
Hey Xanthe here, Woah! My mind is blown. Like it literary just exploded. I am writing this as a ghost now XD This was... Very unique. It is not something ...
Jun 28, 2013
