xxKittyKatxx

I enjoyed this a lot. (: I wish I had the time to do a full critique... :/ Keep writing. -KAT

Oh my god. I really liked this. I relate to it, the imagery is great... Keep up the good work. -KAT

Thank you all so much, Im flattered, and its greatly appreciated that you guys took the time to read a poem by little me. (: This was just somthing I ...

I enjoyed this poem. Its a bit too happy for my taste, but I enjoyed it anyways. (: It flowed nicely, and you rhymed almost perfectlly. I really hope you ...

Good work my elf! (: I like how it flows evenly. Its not like mine where I have a diffucult time rhyming and such. Its beautiful! Love always, Kat. =^..^=

I won't lie to you none of it flowed and when that happens others don't know what you are tyring to make them see and that can throw them off ...

Well my focus wasnt literally a black hole, it was more of a metaphore. But thanks for the pointers, ideas, and ect. Its greatly appreciated. (:

I liked this; it was quite sweet and contemplative. Only thing that annoyed me was that some of the rhymes are a bit awkward - angel/archangel, for example. Maybe that ...

Thanks! :)

Thanks for the criticism, Im not too I needed it. I know you mean well if it so much as makes me feel a little down, but thats what'll make ...

I think its quite cute! :elephant: