Published August 3, 2010
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This was really good, good work. As for a name, if you can't think of one then let it be vague and let it be called "a thought" or some equally vague title or use the date you wrote it or the date you wrote about.
I enjoyed this poem. Its a bit too happy for my taste,
but I enjoyed it anyways. (: It flowed nicely, and you rhymed almost perfectlly.
I really hope you keep writing, dont doubt yourself.
-KAT
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has very good flow and emotion. as for a name theres multiple things that it could be.
My True Love
The Way I Love You
Perfect Harmony
the list is endless
Good Work,
Porter
I really liked this poem =) It flowed easily and showed emotion. Plus, this is the first piece of work I've read since I created an account, haha.