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Re: Trouble in the Halls(Fair warning-Triggering scenes read at your own risk)
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Nov 15, 2015
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Re: I Walk
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Nov 15, 2015
Okay so this is a review and I want to first want to tell you that your poem is good with a nice story and organization. Now let me tell ... -
Re: NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me * Chapter 1*
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Nov 15, 2015
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Re: NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me *Chapter 4*
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Nov 15, 2015
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Re: The Beuaty of Wrtiing
Yup I unersand yur hendwitn jst lke i du naw. I love the way you write this it is so unique and stylist. I love the way you write your ...
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Re: How to Attract Readers
Yep I agree It is all in the title. The title gaves like a summary of what is the story going to be about. And if the title is more ...
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Re: The Star Gardens
Wow Fantasytic it was so magical so dreamy and full of magical visions. I could really dream and vision the place where i can put myself to the story. "If ...
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Re: Free
I love your poem and it was good. I like all the rhyming and the stanzas. In the end was very interesting and the beginning to the end tells what ...
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Re: .
Wow when i click on your story i thought you going to write 3 full story but you wrote 3 stories that is together and short. It could be comedy ...
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Re: Mrs.Creeps
In the first paragraph i like the way you describe the place and it helps the reader to imagine that."the woods are a very dark and sometimes wondrous place to ...
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Re: Sacrifice
This story is nice and it does teach writers in real life and it teach me something. I wrote 4 stories in my life i am on my 4th one ...
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Re: The Creature Changer
I really love your short story. A miserable childhood that became a evil person in the future. If you don't know what am I talking about, the character's life was ...
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Re: My Demons Won't Leave
Wow, I love your story and it is very interesting. And I don't know what to say i just really love it. Murder. Demons. Lonely. Sadness. Emo. All that stuff ...
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Re: Buried Alive
Wow it was good, your story is like really real it reminds me of slaves in the back then. It was sad in the end, her sister get shot, her ...
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Re: Chapter One: Margaret's Coffee Shop
Hi, I love your story. The plot is nice and the story is mysterious and interesting. I love the way you describe the man and it catch for a second. ...
Nov 14, 2015
