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Ok, hey there, buddeh. So, review. I didn't finish reading it, because I *have* to tell you these things now! >.< You have a lot of description when talking about ...

Hey babelicious! Ok, so, as you know, I'm not like, a professional reviewer like YOU or other YWSers, but I'll do it anyway (don't expect much). I like how I ...

Not as good as the others, I'll admit, but still good. I'd like to hear more about school though...the play? I really enjoyed that part, and would love to read ...

I found this! I thought chapter eight was the latest one but it wasn't and it made me all hoppy like ^-^ Teehee, loved this one, too. Although, the transition ...

Eeheeheeheeheehee! Oh my god, I love this! See, when I first started reading Breena I was all like "I wonder what they are. Vampires? Demons?....Things?" But then they're fairies! Omhmygodohmygodohmyg

Ok, you were complaining about how it doesn't have any emotion, and I agree. However, I really like that about this piece. It just adds to the voice. I don't ...

Hey there! I've read all chapters of this story and saw huge progress in your writing. At first it was just decent, not really thought through or thought about, it ...

Oh my god, I only got halfway through when you started talking about Rory and I had to stop because I was laughing too hard! Oh my god, Naddie, RORY!!!!! ...

I liked it! I agree that the title didn't work, though. I liked how short the lines where, but I think it should have rhymed a bit more. Just a ...

I loved it! It was *AMAZING**! The vocabulary, the descriptions, the feelings, the imagery! It was all awesome, and funny, too. I just really liked it, all around. Keep doing ...

I loved the feel of this poem, and I really liked it. I disagree with Reddy, just to be nuisance to him, but I really did really like it, and ...

My dearest Sammy, this was great! Told you you should post something. OK, onto the review... It was a really good idea, but there was a few grammatical errors, and ...

Yay for Roreo! Well done, mah buddy. I really liked it, and I agree that the whole rejoicing thing was a bit odd when the rest of the poem is ...

The first words that popped into my head when I finished reading this were "ew" and "oh my god." I thought this was terrible and great, and greatly terrible. It ...

Wow. OK, I really love this poem. I thought it was awesome, and sad, and awesome, and...wow. So, I don't think I really have much to say. It was fantastic, ...