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wow, talk about a late review!!! I had this done a while ago when you reviewed mine, but when i came back to thte page it said 'under construction' and ...

SecretM! Hey! :) She sat. Or rather sat on her feet. Chrissie was on top of a two story building, waiting for the target. Her red, wavy, messy hair blowing ...

Hey CO! :D The gentle whisper of waves brushing past, the cold glow of the moon dimly lighting the world around me, around us. No life surrounding us to make ...

Hi Kamas!! :) Well honestly I was really confused by this. I think you're talking about how you've parted from innocence. The poem recalls moments you spent with innocence, like ...

BrainBloom, this was awesome! I could really feel your emotions throughout this whole piece and i couldn't stop reading. I think a lot of people, including me, can relate to ...

Wow, I really loved reading this! I actually loved how you set it up with the lines and the extra dots :) My only complaint is that the last stanza ...

Yea, i really loved this! It covered a lot of points people have about God without getting too long or extensive about it, which i really liked :D. This subject ...

Yea I really liked this too. I totally understand what you're saying by this xD. I always love it when people make poems look more artistic, like when you colored ...

hey there! well you already know that i emailed my review to you. I also think it would help you to get more reviews on this if you posted this ...

hey!! i finally went to your page! i loved this new style of yours, and i think it fits you really well! a few things i thought of when i ...

Wow i loved this! you did such a great job here! there's really not much to critique on, just the usual. More description would be nice, maybe make it longer ...

Hey I just wanted to say that this whole story has a really great vampire vibe going on. Good job! I love all of your characters. I was really annoyed ...

I was a little bit disappointed reading this because I really wanted that otherworldly feel you get when you visit another country. You had no visual descriptions of the town ...

Hey there! Wow, I really liked this! You’re ending was especially nice; not many people can make the transformation into insanity as convincing as you did. I didn’t feel like ...

A speck of dust is definitely the most amazing thing in this world. Despite being insignificant and negligible it has the ability to paint the sky blue and the power ...