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  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter Two

    Chapter Two 9:02 “Everyone out of the building!” Larry shouted. No-one moved. “NOW!” People started screaming. The whole office was a mess. People were scrambling out of their desks, trying ...

    Jul 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter One

    “Good morning sleepy head.” Those were the last words I heard her say before the disaster. She said those four words and gave me a good morning kiss. You’re probably ...

    Jul 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    Alright, I’m doing this a bit out of order. I accidentally forgot to save chap 6 part two so I’m going onto this after I’ve reviewed chap 6 p 1 ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    Forgotten A scream made its way up from the depths of Ira’s chest and tore from his throat when searing pain shot through his body like hot iron. His eyes ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Delete

    Cold 'What's that smell?' Eden asked, looking up to to Louis when she caught a whiff of something that smelled like rot. ultra picky, but what kind of rot? Rotting ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Wizard's Thief - Contest Entry(?)

    The palm tree’s leaves fluttered in the breeze like slender fingers tickling the sky. The waves sloshed over the sand, pulling reluctantly back into the sea where the setting sun ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Blur the Lines - Part Two - Chapters 3 - 5

    CHAPTER THREE The wintry night air whipped cruelly around Esti’s unprotected body, chilling her to the bone. The stars stared coldly out over the streets of Houston, watching as she ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hope

    I liked this! I usually have a really hard time understanding poems, but I felt like I got this one ^_^ That's a huge compliment to you, you made the ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    Dark (continued) He gulped, unsatisfied with this end but aware that nothing could be changed. He did not even try to cower behind his arms as some sort of defenseless ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    ‘...Ira...? ...Ira!’ He roused when Vanessa’s voice finally reached his ears, and opened his eyes. Aside from the faint light of night shining through the gap above comma it was ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    ...Zayn shuddered when he awoke, and inhaled a sharp breath of cold air. It stabbed into his lungs like a thousand knives all at once, throwing him into a fit ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    Eden Louis pressed a cool cloth to the hollow of the woman’s neck, looking up at Violet the same instant to make sure that she was still sleeping only to ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 10 & 11

    Alright, first of all I sorry the review's late!! I had it saved, but it took a while to get around to posting it x( now it's probably dated and ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    BEAST Louis opened his eyes and reached across the floor blindly until his fingers touched her shoulder. He looked up to make sure she was still there despite knowing that, ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    PRINCE Fear. It binds, cripples, chokes, and smothers. The weak and the strong, the courageous and the meek all have something to fear. The fearless do not exist, they never ...

    Jul 1, 2011


Isn't it funny how day by day nothing changes but when you look back, everything's different?
— C.S. Lewis