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Re: Another poem for my mate
Wait, I don't get it... "It has reached it's very last day," but, "Miles away can't keep us apart"? It seemed really forced, and the rhythm was really messed up. ...
Jul 5, 2005 -
Re: Love Is Not Like Anything
Thanks, everybody, for your criticism and comments. ^_^
Jun 22, 2005 -
Re: Hypocrisy
I really like this, it's very original. It's very vivid, too. It's very good.
Jun 17, 2005 -
Re: A CORRUPT LAND
I agree with Firestarter. You need to work on the structure. And the line, "Looking for a place to shower," is a bit too rough for this poem. Otherwise, it's ...
Jun 16, 2005 -
Re: the ripples in the water are not gentle anymore
It's really pretty. I can't stop reading it, lol.
Jun 16, 2005 -
Re: I'll Never Let You Go.
Your poem is very pretty, I love it.
Jun 16, 2005