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Thanks, i love this poem, ive written loads of poems in the past and this has to be one of my favourites :D thankyou all for your nice comments! i ...

I took your advise and changed the last line - i think it looks and sounds better! thanain for your nice review :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Lol yea it is a bit too long... i write VERY long sentences! :D

Lol thanks, that was a lot of info to take in! i do sooo need to improve my grammer and punctuation... but im working on it :D

Im happy to say that im your first review! I really liked it! im so curiose to what the bill was, but i think the poem could have been more ...

thanks, i love nice reviews! I just wrote the poem off the top of my head so i wasnt that sure about the ending itself, but i just wanted to ...

I liked it, it was simple and said a lot to me - keep it up! i want to read more! :D

that was so beautiful, like a hym, i loved it. It was so sweet, i could imagen god taking the childs hand and they being together :D

That was so sweet! It was really like watching your little sister grow up, through your eyes, i felt your emotions so easily from your poem - it was beautifully ...

That sounded awesome! it is the kind of book i would love to read, im so curiose to find out about what happens - no bad comments, it was perfect!

That was brilliant. I felt like i was getting pulled into the story - i want more! I thought it was great how it was set out, i really felt ...

:D well it was only my first try! i know my spelling is rubbish... and my sentences are VERY long, but i think i did ok my first try :D ...

wow that was great! i cant wait to read more, it was amazing, i loved how you described them both :D