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Hey =] Aww - that was so nice! I'm not really that good at reviewing poetry or lyrics but this was really good. The imagery was beautiful and it seemed ...

Hey =] I'll do my best to review this but I really couldn't find that much wrong with it. away, - The comma should be a full stop where Malc ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Nit-piks; They’d needed to bring her back for something, something very important… - I don't know if this would work better as two seperate ...

Hey =] I've been reading this but never reviewed as I couldn't find anything constructive to point out. I love the way you are slowly building up Aline's character and ...

Hey =] I really like the concept for this story, but I agree with tnme22 in that we don't really know anything about any of your characters. This is partly ...

Hey =] I'm back again! I think I enjoyed this part more than the first. I love the relationship between Cal and Gwen. I can really imagine them having been ...

Hey Hannah! I really enjoyed reading this :D Everyone else seems to have already pointed out all of the nit-piks so I'll just give you one of those less helpful ...

Hey =] I'm so sorry Sela but I really couldn't find anything wrong with it - that isn't to say that others won't be able to either. Whenever I try ...

Hey =] I'm here as promised! I think Meadowlark pretty much covered all of the nit-piks, but I'll try my best! For a moment he stopped his continuous pacing to ...

Hey =] The concept of this story is interesting, but I'm finding it a bit hard to understand. I think it would make more sense if you put the thoughts ...

Hey Borntoshop! I'll be glad to help you =] Nit-piks first; All through class I got notes chucked at me - 'All through class, notes were chucked at me.' - ...

Hey =] I'm not at all good at reviewing poetry, but I have to say that I really like this. The imagery you use in the first two stanzas is ...

Hey Pippie =] Thanks for the PM! This part was good, but it seemed a little slow paced compared to the ones previous to it. Maybe that's why you don't ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! I don't think that chapter was awful at all! It just seemed a little slow paced as you took the time to explain memories ...

Hey! I'm back again =] Nit-piks first... Throughout the entire summer -I'd add a comma after 'summer' As it turns out I was right, the kids were a lot more ...