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Re: To Those Of You Who Helped Me Die
Awww, thanks! Your words really touch me.
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 5: Battle For Commander-Selene
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Jun 7, 2014
Hello, pal! Mr. Powers here for another fun-filled review! I'll admit that I'm just jumping in here, I've never read the first four chapters. Let me explain to you all ... -
Re: All Week Long (Ashley's Schedule)
The next few poems, including my poem called "Please, Danny" focus on the daughter.
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: Passed Around
It's all part of a story I've concocted. The confusing parts all have a hand in my story. Just wait.
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: Passed Around
Thanks! It's a part of a series of poems, all of which will be tied together to form a story. You should read what I've got so far, along with ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Today (or "Walking Out")
Thanks for the review! For further explanation behind this poem, read my post on my wall.
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Suicide Boy
Not a single e. I'd commit suicide if I had to do this.
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: Fendall Woods (Part II)
... points? I don't know. I'm keeping it up. I just don't want to continue it beyond this.
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Catch the Wind
I like this poem. I'm glad you did that intentional change at the end there; it makes this poem unique, a "special blessing", if you will.
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Fendall Woods (Part I)
Awww, thanks! I promise that later chapters will be more detailed, and therefore more realistic.
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Fendall Woods (Part I)
Oh my god thanks! Yeah, don't worry. The next chapter will be more detailed.
May 29, 2014 -
Re: A Bad Poem For A Bad Life
Thanks for the review! I changed up the rhyme scheme numerous times here, so that's probably why you got a bit confused.
May 29, 2014 -
Re: A Bad Poem For A Bad Life
Hey, any criticism is helpful criticism. Thanks!
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Ode to Books
At least spiders can't fly.... *shudders*
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Ode to Books
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
May 26, 2014
