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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: That Night

    This poem is pretty deep. It hit me hard, considering I, too, have lost a close family member. In fact, some of the lines in this poem are pretty near ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Life

    A POEM THAT RHYMES! Okay, so here we go with this review. The first stanza is good and simple. It sets up the poem... or at least what it should ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Look at Me

    This is a-frickin'-mazing. I love the overpowering sense of self-confidence. This poem is all about remaining true to yourself and ignoring people who notice your flaws. The speaker is basically ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Dramatic Re: Only in 'Merica

    Hiya! I just wanted to comment on a few things here. I'm not a big fan of poems that don't rhyme, but the randomness and shortness of this poem made ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Koala's Climb

    I love koalas. They're beautiful creatures. This was a very simple poem about a koala bear, one that could be read to little children. "Koala" shouldn't be capitalized, someone already ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there

    This was great. It's a powerful self-help piece, encouraging people (nerds, in particular) to stop being ashamed of what they are, to be proud of their nerdy selves. However, this ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ode to Books

    I'm not a fan of free-verse poems, so.... This is good. And pretty straightforward. Books appear to have been the only thing in your life at certain times, and you're ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Do you want to play with me?- Your Creepypasta

    Well... that was.... wut. I'm lost. And confused. But yet interested. I like how you force the reader into the shoes of the main character. Then you guide the reader/character ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What is Love?

    You know, I like this. I don't think it necessarily follows any poetic scheme at all, but it's still good. You say that love will never be able to be ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Invasion of Chocolate, Pt. 1

    This was... hmmm... This was a humorous story here. I mean, it seems serious, but you're fighting CHOCOLATE. Think about this for a second. Chocolate, terrorizing cities and devouring the ...

    May 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: prologue

    Well, I'm a bit confused by this. And interested. This would hint at a horrible future. Any world where someone can become President because of their looks and their parents ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Untitled - Part 1

    Well, that was... interesting. If I were you, I'd describe the other characters, because you only described Midnight. You may have overused commas. But other than that, I like it ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Time.

    I'm going to be honest with you, here. This wasn't the best I've ever read. But that doesn't mean it stinks. It has potential. In the first stanza, you rhymed ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Name Is

    Well, this hit me hard. It's simple, yet to the point. Misery is the cause of depression. In the speaker's case, it's the cause of everything wrong that has ever ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Politics Re: Unborn Christina

    Oh my god, what did I just read? EPICNESS. I JUST READ PURE EPICNESS. This is by far my favorite poem on this website. I like how Christina has a ...

    May 17, 2014


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