writingbright

Hello, bright here for a quick review! Feel free to ignore as much or as little of this as you like. :) First off, I really like this poem. It ...

Hi, I’m here for a quick review! To begin, I really like the repetition you’ve used in this poem, e.g. “and I just watch and observe.” I feel this helps ...

Hi, I’m here for a quick review! As starlitmind and fleuralplants have mentioned, the imagery in this poem is excellent, as is the sensory language you’ve used. I particularly like ...

Hi, I’m here for a review! First off, I feel the themes of this poem are very important and should absolutely be written about more. Go you on the feminist ...

Hi, I’m here for a quick review! I really liked the repetition of “red” in this poem - it reminded me a lot of blood, which of course leads onto ...

Hi, I’m here for a quick review! I really like this poem. It’s short, sweet, and gets the point across. I like the idea of “the good” keeping the world ...

Wow. I had to take a moment there to process what I’d just read. That’s truly how much it impacted me. Those phrases “doesn’t know who she is”/“what she wants”, ...

Hello again - it looks like I’ll be reviewing another one of your poems today! How exciting. To be blunt, I absolutely love this poem. As a Christian myself, I ...

Hi, I’m new to YWS scene, and this whole reviewing thing is quite new to me, so forgive me if this isn’t the most helpful, but I thought I’d give ...